Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, of course, because you know, texting messages is kinda lives symbol pleasure, pleasure. I usually send text messages with my friends via social media such as Facebook, Instagram or Snapchat and that's really relaxing.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
If I'm being honest, me and my friends usually send memes we've come across online or we will discuss about the latest movies or even events during the day. Or maybe we can.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
Well, I enjoy both because you know group chats is suitable with social moments such as doing projects, but one-on-one conversations helps me have more personal.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
Well, I enjoy both because you know face to face conversations are a wonderful for personal connections. Having said that, social media will help me to stay connected with some friends who are live far away and we can send text messages.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
To be honest with you, disagreements are bound to occur and it happens from time to time. It's uh. Although my friends and I have a lot of the same interest, but sometimes arguments will help us understand more and stay connected.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.
예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. I usually use social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram to send messages and share updates.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên tránh nói lắp và hoàn thành câu trả lời đầy đủ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.
예시: Usually, my friends and I share funny memes we find online, discuss the latest movies, and talk about events that happened during the day.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để làm rõ ý, đồng thời cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.
예시: I enjoy both group chats and one-on-one conversations. Group chats are useful for social moments like working on projects, while one-on-one chats allow for more personal and meaningful discussions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi nhỏ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I enjoy both face-to-face communication and social media. Face-to-face conversations help build personal connections, while social media allows me to stay in touch with friends who live far away.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời cần tránh nói lắp và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của bạn.
예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because disagreements are natural. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.
문법
× texting messages is kinda lives symbol pleasure, pleasure
✓ texting messages is kinda like a live symbol of pleasure
The phrase 'kinda lives symbol pleasure' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'like a live symbol of pleasure' to convey the intended meaning clearly and correctly.
× group chats is suitable with social moments such as doing projects
✓ group chats are suitable for social moments such as doing projects
The subject 'group chats' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate suitability.
× we will discuss about the latest movies or even events during the day
✓ we will discuss the latest movies or even events during the day
The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Removing 'about' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× me and my friends usually send memes we've come across online
✓ my friends and I usually send memes we've come across online
When used as the subject of a sentence, the correct pronoun is 'I' rather than 'me'. Also, it is polite to mention oneself last.
× face to face conversations are a wonderful for personal connections
✓ face-to-face conversations are wonderful for personal connections
'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Also, 'a wonderful' is incorrect because 'wonderful' is an adjective and needs a noun; removing 'a' corrects the sentence.
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