Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ звучит немного неестественно из-за грамматических ошибок и повторов. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегать лишних слов и пауз, а также структурировать ответ с четким началом и поддерживающими деталями.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we can talk about many aspects of our lives. For example, we often share pictures of our pets, like dogs, which makes our conversations more interesting.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в словоупотреблении и структуре предложения, а также нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать более точные слова и связки, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и логичным.

예시: We usually chat about the latest trends on TikTok because it's fun and helps us bond. Besides that, we also discuss life challenges and global issues, which we find very interesting.

제안: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и лишние паузы. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно, использовать правильные формы слов и избегать повторов.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am introverted. It feels more comfortable and convenient for me than talking in a group.

제안: Ответ содержит неполные и неясные фразы, а также ошибки в грамматике. Нужно строить предложения более четко, избегать неуместных пауз и использовать связки для логичности.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's reactions to my opinions, which helps me feel more relaxed during conversations.

제안: Ответ очень запутанный и содержит много повторов и грамматических ошибок. Рекомендуется формулировать мысли ясно, использовать простые предложения и избегать лишних слов.

예시: I don't like arguing with my friends because it feels unnecessary and harms our friendship. However, sometimes we do argue, which I think is normal in any relationship.

× I'm really like have a chat with my friends because we can discuss a lot of things in our life.

✓ I'm really like having a chat with my friends because we can discuss a lot of things in our life.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'have' should be corrected to 'having'. This is a common structure in English: 'like + verb-ing'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Also, we, I and, or my friends can send umm, pictures, umm, from a lot of things, for example, dogs, my dogs or his or her dogs.

✓ Also, my friends and I can send pictures of many things, for example, dogs, my dogs or their dogs.

The pronoun order should be 'my friends and I' as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'send pictures from' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of'. 'His or her dogs' is better replaced with 'their dogs' for simplicity and correctness. This correction addresses pronoun usage and preposition errors.

× Our discussion is about trend on Tiktok because it is fun and cold for our friendship.

✓ Our discussion is about trends on TikTok because it is fun and good for our friendship.

The noun 'trend' should be plural 'trends' to match the context. 'On TikTok' is correct, but 'cold' is a wrong word here; it should be 'good'. This correction fixes pluralization and word choice errors.

× we love discuss, uh, some life problems and world problems because it's very interesting for us.

✓ we love discussing some life problems and world problems because it's very interesting for us.

After 'love', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing' when referring to activities. Therefore, 'discuss' should be 'discussing'. This is a standard grammatical structure in English.

× I like, umm, have a chat with only one friends, because for me it's more convenient than I have a chat with a group of people,

✓ I like having a chat with only one friend because for me it's more convenient than having a chat with a group of people.

The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to 'only one'. Also, 'like have' should be 'like having' to follow the correct verb pattern. This correction addresses singular/plural agreement and verb form.

× I like, umm, have a chat with only one friends, because for me it's more convenient than I have a chat with a group of people,

✓ I like having a chat with only one friend because for me it's more convenient than having a chat with a group of people.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'having' rather than the base form 'have'. This applies to both instances in the sentence. This correction improves grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to communicate with people face to face because I can control how people reacted for my opinion or my sentences

✓ I prefer to communicate with people face to face because I can control how people react to my opinion or my sentences

The verb 'reacted' should be in present tense 'react' to match the present preference. The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'to' after 'react'. This correction fixes tense and preposition errors.

× and also I can stay relaxed when I see that people uh with which **** you.

✓ and also I can stay relaxed when I see how people react to what I say.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a proper verb and object. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence that conveys the intended meaning. This addresses sentence structure errors.

× but rather I think but rather we we have argue but it's normal I think.

✓ but rather I think we argue, but it's normal, I think.

The phrase 'have argue' is incorrect; the verb should be 'argue' without 'have' in this context. Also, removing repeated words and adding commas improves clarity. This correction fixes verb form and sentence clarity.