Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details without repetition or unclear phrases. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'beloved 1' or 'I am lob'. Keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends whenever I have free time. I prefer talking in small groups because I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts. I usually chat about our daily activities and interests.

제안: Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Make your answer more coherent and relevant to the question.

예시: I usually chat with my classmate about our studies since we are in the same class. We also talk about events that happened during the school day and sometimes share our opinions on different subjects.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs to be clearer and more fluent. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference logically. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it is easier to follow the conversation. In groups, people often talk simultaneously, which makes it hard for me to understand and respond properly.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Make a clear choice and explain your reasons logically. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and keep your answer natural and effective.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel more comfortable expressing my ideas there. Face-to-face conversations sometimes make me nervous, so online chatting helps me share my thoughts more easily.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'who gonna being lunchbox' or 'never bring a loans in their tipping time'. Provide a specific example and explain briefly why arguments happen.

예시: Sometimes my friends and I argue about small things, like who should bring the lunchbox to school. This happens because not everyone remembers to bring their own food, which causes some disagreements.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friend every time I have a free time.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends every time I have free time.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend. Also, 'a free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article.

× Then the other time I spend my time with the chatting with my beloved 1 and also a friend because I am a person who don't like to talk in a person but in a setting.

✓ Then other times I spend my time chatting with my beloved one and also a friend because I am a person who doesn't like to talk to a person but in a setting.

The phrase 'with the chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting with'. 'Beloved 1' should be 'beloved one'. 'Don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with singular subject 'I am a person who'. Also, 'talk in a person' should be 'talk to a person'.

× I am lob I love it and I also chat a lot.

✓ I love it and I also chat a lot.

The phrase 'I am lob' is unclear and seems to be a typo; removing it clarifies the sentence. No third person singular issue here after correction.

× Well, I usually chat with my friend some topics about studies because it's also in my same class.

✓ Well, I usually chat with my friends about some topics related to studies because they are also in my class.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'It's also in my same class' is incorrect; 'they are also in my class' is correct.

× We can say more. He's my classmate and we share things that happened in the daytime in our schools and at the same time sometimes we used to share things and talking about the.

✓ We can say more. He's my classmate and we share things that happen during the day at our school, and sometimes we share things and talk about them.

'Happened' should be present tense 'happen' to match habitual action. 'Talking about the' is incomplete; it should be 'talk about them'. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' if referring to the same school.

× Well, personally, I would love to chat with the uh, one person with at other at a time, because talking with us, uh, chatting with the group, uh, it can be so hard for me to understand what they are talking.

✓ Well, personally, I would love to chat with one person at a time, because chatting with a group can be so hard for me to understand what they are talking about.

'With the uh, one person with at other at a time' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'with one person at a time'. 'Talking with us' is unclear and removed. 'What they are talking' should be 'what they are talking about'.

× And I also sometimes I also can't able to chat uh, because they are spamming so many, so many times.

✓ And sometimes I am not able to chat because they spam so many times.

'Can't able to' is incorrect; use either 'can't' or 'am not able to'. 'Spamming so many, so many times' is awkward; 'spam so many times' is better.

× Where, where will I already said that I am a person who like to talk with a social media rather than the face to face because when I'm talking in a face to face, I feel more comfortable and uncomfortable.

✓ Well, I already said that I am a person who likes to talk via social media rather than face to face because when I'm talking face to face, I feel uncomfortable.

'Talk with a social media' should be 'talk via social media'. 'The face to face' should be 'face to face'. 'I feel more comfortable and uncomfortable' is contradictory; likely intended 'I feel uncomfortable'.

× And I also don't like to, uh, I don't, uh, I can't create a ideas about the topics rather than the best place.

✓ And I also don't like to, uh, I can't create ideas about the topics in that setting.

'Create a ideas' is incorrect; 'ideas' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Rather than the best place' is unclear; replaced with 'in that setting' for clarity.

× I would say in this in this specific topic, I would say sometimes we we do argue with some special topics.

✓ I would say on this specific topic, sometimes we do argue about some special topics.

'In this specific topic' should be 'on this specific topic'. 'Argue with some special topics' should be 'argue about some special topics'.

× Most of the times we we argue on the topic of who gonna being lunchbox in our school because at that time so many students that never bring a loans in their tipping time.

✓ Most of the time we argue about who is going to bring the lunchbox in our school because at that time many students never bring loans during their tipping time.

'Most of the times' should be 'Most of the time'. 'Who gonna being lunchbox' should be 'who is going to bring the lunchbox'. 'So many students that never bring a loans' should be 'many students never bring loans'. 'Tipping time' is unclear but kept as is.