Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, I like chatting with friends as extrovert person myself, I want to know their hobbies and interest and I want to share my daily routine and what I am currently doing and what am I up to. So I love talking with them.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
I actually chat about everything about my daily life, like what I'm doing and what the episodes of anime I'm watching, and I want to know their daily routine, hot college dramas they're going through. That's why I feel connected and happy.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
It actually depends what kind of topic I'm going to talk. If it's personal then I like to share it with one single friend. But if it's a funny meme or something related to our group, then I would like to share it on our group. That's why that's how I will enjoy my time.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I actually don't mind anything. I love talking face to face and by social media. Also when I am not with them and I am far apart from them, I use social media as our communication. But when I'm around them I prefer face to face connection so I go to them or invite them over.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Actually I don't argue with friends because I'm very afraid of confronting people. Umm like sometimes like oh I didn't like the way my friend talked to me but I couldn't confirm then about that it but it still hurt me. So I don't argue, I just listen and lift.
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총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I want to', you can say 'I enjoy sharing my daily routine and learning about their hobbies.'
예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because, as an extrovert, I enjoy sharing my daily routine and learning about their hobbies and interests. This helps me stay connected with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more specific vocabulary. For example, use 'such as' to introduce examples and 'which makes me feel' to express feelings.
예시: I usually chat about various aspects of my daily life, such as the anime episodes I'm watching and the college dramas my friends are experiencing, which makes me feel connected and happy.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 78.0제안: Try to improve sentence structure and use linking words like 'however' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.
예시: It depends on the topic. If it's personal, I prefer to talk with one friend; however, if it's something funny or related to our group, I share it with everyone, so I can enjoy my time more.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 82.0제안: Your answer is clear but can be more natural by combining sentences and using linking words like 'however' and 'therefore'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.
예시: I enjoy both face-to-face communication and social media. However, when I'm far from my friends, I use social media to stay in touch; therefore, when we are together, I prefer face-to-face conversations.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 70.0제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Use linking words such as 'although' and 'however' to explain contrasting feelings. Also, clarify unclear phrases like 'lift'.
예시: I usually avoid arguing with friends because I am afraid of confrontation. Although sometimes I feel hurt by what they say, I prefer to listen quietly rather than argue.
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