Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'friends' and try to combine ideas smoothly. Also, use plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my schoolmates, through WhatsApp.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid unnecessary hesitation and clarify your ideas.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about recent events, such as what happened the day before. When I'm busy, WhatsApp is the easiest way to share news and updates with them.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve fluency and clarity. Also, avoid filler words and be more specific about your feelings.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am quite shy and feel more comfortable sharing my opinions openly with close friends rather than in a group.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words and avoid hesitation sounds. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to express our feelings and emotions directly, which is more effective than communicating through social media.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response with specific examples and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically and complete your sentences.

예시: I rarely argue with my friends, but sometimes I do if they say something that I find unacceptable or hard to tolerate.

× Especially I like to chat with my friend and my school friends through WhatsApp.

✓ Especially, I like to chat with my friends and my school friends on WhatsApp.

The preposition 'through' is incorrectly used here; 'on WhatsApp' is the correct preposition to indicate the platform used for chatting. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× With my friends, I usually chat with the special nurses on the events what was happened, uh, like previous day.

✓ With my friends, I usually chat about the special nurses and the events that happened, like the previous day.

The phrase 'on the events what was happened' is incorrect. 'Chat about' is the correct collocation, and 'events that happened' is the proper relative clause. Also, 'like previous day' should be 'like the previous day' to specify the time.

× This is the only phone that I can chat through them through WhatsApp so I can share the news or updates.

✓ This is the only phone through which I can chat with them on WhatsApp, so I can share news or updates.

The phrase 'chat through them through WhatsApp' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'chat with them on WhatsApp'. Also, 'through which' is the proper relative pronoun and preposition combination for 'phone'.

× I do prefer chat with a friend because I am not familiar or I am very shy person to chat with a group.

✓ I do prefer chatting with a friend because I am not familiar with, or I am a very shy person to chat with a group.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' is required. Also, 'not familiar' should be followed by 'with' to be grammatically correct, and 'a very shy person' needs the article 'a'.

× I prefer communicate face to face because that is the mode of communication, uh, that we can express whatever the feelings and emotions, uh, directly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because that is the mode of communication where we can express feelings and emotions directly.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive 'to communicate'. Also, 'whatever the feelings and emotions' is awkward; 'feelings and emotions' without 'whatever the' is clearer. 'Where' is better than 'that' to refer to 'mode of communication'.

× Uh, that is the best way to communicate than social media.

✓ That is the best way to communicate compared to social media.

The phrase 'best way to communicate than social media' is incorrect. The correct comparative phrase is 'compared to social media' or 'rather than social media'.