Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在较多口语填充词（如umm, uh），影响流畅性。建议减少这些词汇的使用，使表达更自然流畅。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达“good news or bad news”和“strengthen our relationships”的意思。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to share important news and learn from each other, which helps strengthen our relationships.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议回答时注意句子完整，使用连接词使内容连贯，并具体说明聊天内容。

예시: We usually talk about daily life, future plans, and sometimes international news. Most importantly, we share the latest information with each other to stay updated.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“Where I prefer”应为“I prefer”，以及“someone will interrupted”应为“someone interrupts”。建议注意语法时态和主谓一致，同时减少口语填充词，使表达更准确。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in groups, it's hard to express my ideas clearly as others often interrupt me.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“their their body movement”和“are playing a important”。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，同时可以丰富词汇表达。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe my friend's facial expressions and body language, which are very important for understanding emotions.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“strengthens”应与主语一致，“conveying”应为“convey”。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式，同时可以用更具体的例子丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because it helps us understand each other better and strengthens our relationship. For instance, when we have different opinions, we discuss them openly to share our perspectives.

× There is a wide range of topics such as daily life, uh, future plan and so on.

✓ There is a wide range of topics such as daily life, uh, future plans and so on.

“future plan”应为复数形式“future plans”，因为这里指的是多种计划，符合“wide range of topics”后面应使用复数名词的语法规则。

× International news but the most important uh, communication is about sharing some latest informations to each other because.

✓ International news but the most important uh, communication is about sharing some latest information with each other because.

“informations”是不可数名词“information”的错误复数形式，应改为单数形式。同时，介词应为“with”而非“to”，但此处只纠正符合题目要求的语法错误。

× Where I prefer chatting with only one friend because umm I used to chat in a group of people and I find it very very hard to convey my ideas clearly because someone will interrupted my conversation.

✓ Where I prefer chatting with only one friend because umm I used to chat in a group of people and I find it very very hard to convey my ideas clearly because someone will interrupt my conversation.

“will interrupted”中“interrupted”是过去式，搭配“will”应使用动词原形“interrupt”，这是将来时态的错误用法。

× International news but the most important uh, communication is about sharing some latest informations to each other because.

✓ International news but the most important uh, communication is about sharing some latest information with each other because.

动词“share”后应接介词“with”表示“与某人分享”，而非“to”。

× Well, I think those body languages are playing a important.

✓ Well, I think those body languages are playing an important role.

“a important”中“important”以元音音素开头，冠词应为“an”。此外，“playing a important”结构不完整，需补充“role”使句子完整。

× Well, I think those body languages are playing a important.

✓ Well, I think that body language is playing an important role.

“body language”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“body languages”。

× In fact, I think friends are the person who cared about you the most.

✓ In fact, I think friends are the people who care about you the most.

“friends”是复数，后面应使用复数代词“people”而非单数“person”，动词“care”也应使用现在时复数形式。