Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答很自然且有趣，但有些語法錯誤和重複用詞，建議使用更正確的時態和避免重複表達。

예시: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends. They often say I'm like a bird that keeps talking and never knows when to stop.

제안: 回答內容清楚，但語句結構稍顯重複，建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並避免口語填充詞。

예시: Usually, we chat about our daily lives, such as current events and upcoming plans. Sometimes, we also discuss our future goals, like what we plan to do after graduation.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤和口語化過多，建議使用更正式的表達並加強句子結構的連貫性。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations often involve casual topics, whereas one-on-one chats allow for deeper and more meaningful discussions.

제안: 回答中有多處口語填充詞和語法錯誤，建議減少重複和填充詞，並使用更清晰的句子結構。

예시: Nowadays, many people prefer texting on social media, but I still like face-to-face communication because I can see genuine emotions, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

제안: 回答表達了想法，但語法和用詞不夠準確，建議使用更正確的語法和連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue when we can't find a balance because we are both stubborn and stick to our own opinions. However, I hope to learn how to control my temper better.

× My friends always describe me as a bird that keep talking, keep yapping, that doesn't know when to stop.

✓ My friends always describe me as a bird that keeps talking, keeps yapping, that doesn't know when to stop.

The subject 'a bird' is singular, so the verb should be 'keeps' instead of 'keep' to agree in number. In English, singular third-person subjects require verbs ending with 's' or 'es'.

× Usually we will chat about our daily life, like what is going on and what will happen to our life.

✓ Usually we chat about our daily life, like what is going on and what will happen in our life.

Using 'will' in 'what will happen' is acceptable for future events, but 'usually' indicates habitual action, so 'will' is unnecessary here. Also, 'in our life' is more appropriate than 'to our life' when referring to events happening within one's life.

× Or sometimes we will talk about like our future plan, like what will you do after your graduation?

✓ Or sometimes we talk about our future plans, like what you will do after your graduation.

Again, 'will' is used for future events, but 'sometimes' indicates habitual action, so simple present 'talk' is better. Also, 'future plan' should be plural 'future plans' to match general meaning. The question form 'what will you do' is changed to statement form 'what you will do' to fit the sentence structure.

× Or sometimes we will talk about like our future plan, like what will you do after your graduation?

✓ Or sometimes we will talk about our future plans, like what will you do after your graduation?

The noun 'plan' should be plural 'plans' because it refers to multiple possible plans. Using plural form is more natural when talking about general future intentions.

× I guess I would like to chat with one friend only cause like if we chat with a group of people we will just keep talking nonsense topic that everybody enjoyed but if you're concentrating on someone that you can maybe have a deep conversation.

✓ I guess I would like to chat with one friend only because if we chat with a group of people, we will just keep talking about nonsense topics that everybody enjoys, but if you're concentrating on someone, you can maybe have a deep conversation.

The noun 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because 'nonsense topics' refers to multiple subjects. The verb 'enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoys' to agree with 'everybody' which is singular. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate. Added missing prepositions 'about' and commas for clarity.

× I think nowadays people like to, you know, send texts each other on social media more, but however I still like the fast to fast chat 'cause I can see the factual emotions that express to us in case I, I, I say something wrong.

✓ I think nowadays people like to, you know, send texts to each other on social media more, but I still like face-to-face chat because I can see the actual emotions expressed to us in case I say something wrong.

The phrase 'send texts each other' is missing the preposition 'to'. 'Fast to fast chat' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'face-to-face chat'. 'Factual emotions' is incorrect; 'actual emotions' is more appropriate. 'Express to us' should be 'expressed to us' to use past participle form. Removed redundant 'however' and extra commas for clarity.

× Yeah, sometimes if we cannot strike the balance, we would definitely have some fight 'cause we are both act as we are both stubborn, like we like to stand in our own line.

✓ Yeah, sometimes if we cannot strike a balance, we would definitely have some fights because we both act stubborn, like we like to stand our ground.

The phrase 'we are both act' is incorrect; it should be 'we both act'. 'Some fight' should be plural 'some fights' because it refers to multiple instances. 'Strike the balance' is better as 'strike a balance' for general meaning. 'Stand in our own line' is unnatural; 'stand our ground' is the correct idiom.