Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 중복 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 감정을 표현할 때 더 구체적인 단어를 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Sometimes, when I feel tired or lonely, I talk with them for a long time to feel better.

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문장이 완성되지 않았으며, 구체적인 내용이 부족합니다. 주제에 대해 명확히 말하고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하세요.

예시: Recently, I usually chat with my friends about video games. For example, I enjoy discussing Football Manager and other popular games we play.

제안: 문법 오류와 중복 표현이 많고, 감정을 표현할 때 더 자연스러운 단어를 사용해야 합니다. 이유를 명확히 설명하고, 문장을 완성하세요.

예시: I prefer chatting with one person because I am a shy person. When I talk in a group, I often feel embarrassed.

제안: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 끊겨 있습니다. 상황에 따른 선호를 명확히 설명하고, 예시를 들어 문장을 완성하세요.

예시: It depends on the situation. For serious talks, I prefer face-to-face communication. But for casual chats, I use social media.

제안: 문장이 매우 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 간단하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 감정을 표현하고 이유를 설명하세요.

예시: No, I don't like arguing with my friends. I usually avoid arguments because they make me nervous.

× Yes, I love love the chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friend.

'The' is incorrectly used before 'chatting'. In English, when talking about activities in general, we do not use 'the' before gerunds like 'chatting'. The repetition of 'love' is also a mistake and should be corrected.

× I sometimes I feel the tired and solidarity.

✓ Sometimes I feel tired and lonely.

The sentence has redundant pronoun 'I' and incorrect use of 'the' before 'tired'. Also, 'solidarity' is not appropriate here; 'lonely' better expresses the feeling of being alone.

× So when I was feeling that I chat with my friend for a long time.

✓ So when I was feeling that, I chatted with my friend for a long time.

The verb 'chat' should be in past tense 'chatted' to match the past continuous 'was feeling'. Also, a comma is needed after 'that' for clarity.

× Uh, recently I chat with my friend about the games.

✓ Uh, recently I have chatted with my friend about games.

Since 'recently' refers to a time period up to now, present perfect tense 'have chatted' is more appropriate than simple present 'chat'.

× I love my games.

✓ I love games.

'My games' implies ownership which may not be intended. Generally, 'games' without 'my' is more natural unless specifying owned games.

× I like football manager and people.

✓ I like Football Manager and people.

'Football Manager' is a proper noun (a game title) and should be capitalized. The meaning of 'and people' is unclear; if referring to people in general, it is acceptable but may need clarification.

× I enjoy the chat about that and.

✓ I enjoy chatting about that.

'The chat' is incorrect here; 'chatting' as a gerund is more natural. The sentence is incomplete and 'and' should be removed.

× I prefer to chat only one person because I I am shy guy so I when I chat about chat with group people I feel so shamed and.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because I am a shy guy, so when I chat with a group of people, I feel ashamed.

'Only one person' needs 'with' to indicate the object of chatting. 'Shy guy' requires the article 'a'. 'Chat about chat with group people' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with a group of people'. 'Shamed' should be 'ashamed' to express feeling embarrassed.

× It is up to situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Up to situation' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depends on the situation'.

× When I talk about The Walking task, I prefer to talk about face to face.

✓ When I talk about the walking task, I prefer to talk face to face.

'The Walking task' should be lowercase unless it is a proper noun. 'Talk about face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talk face to face'.

× But if I take chat about.

✓ But if I chat online.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Take chat about' is incorrect; a clearer expression is 'chat online' or 'chat via social media'.

× No I don't like IQ so when I face to argue with my friend I escaped that situation so I because I get nervous on the arguing with my.

✓ No, I don't like arguments, so when I face an argument with my friend, I avoid the situation because I get nervous during arguments.

'I don't like IQ' is incorrect; likely meant 'arguments'. 'Face to argue' should be 'face an argument'. 'Escaped' should be 'avoid' to express habitual action. 'Because I get nervous on the arguing' should be 'because I get nervous during arguments'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring.