Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「connect friends in everywhere and at every time」は「connect with friends everywhere and at any time」と言い換えると自然です。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to connect with them anytime and anywhere, and it's a very convenient way to communicate.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。具体的な話題を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、「I usually chat about daily life, relationships, and mutual friends.」のように表現すると良いでしょう。

예시: I usually chat about daily life, such as what happened during the day, their boyfriends, and other mutual friends.

제안: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。「only one people」は「only one person」が正しいです。また、理由を明確に述べ、論理的に繋げるために接続詞を使うと良いです。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one person because I feel worried about many things in a group chat, such as how many people read my messages.

제안: 回答が意味不明で文法的にも誤りがあります。意図を明確にし、正しい表現を使うことが必要です。例えば、「I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's facial expressions and emotions.」のように言い換えましょう。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's facial expressions and emotions, which helps me understand them better.

제안: 文法と表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べることが大切です。例えば、「No, I don't argue with friends because it is difficult and takes a lot of time and energy.」のように表現しましょう。

예시: No, I don't argue with friends because it is difficult for me and takes a lot of time and energy.

× I can connect friends in everywhere and at every time and secondly it is very convenient way to communication with my friends.

✓ I can connect with friends everywhere and at any time, and secondly, it is a very convenient way to communicate with my friends.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'everywhere'; the correct preposition is 'with' after 'connect'. Also, 'at every time' should be 'at any time'. 'Way to communication' should be 'way to communicate' because 'to' is followed by the base verb form. These preposition and verb form errors affect clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I chat with my friends about daily things, for example, and what's happened to your daily life. And like they're about their boyfriend, about theirs, other friends.

✓ I chat with my friends about daily things, for example, what has happened in their daily life. And also about their boyfriends and other friends.

The pronouns 'your' and 'they're' are incorrectly used. 'Your' should be 'their' to refer to the friends, and 'they're' (they are) is incorrect here; it should be 'they are' or rephrased. Also, 'about theirs, other friends' is incorrect; it should be 'about their other friends'. Correct pronoun usage is essential for clarity and coherence.

× I prefer with only one people, only one person and I feel over worried about many things when I chat in a group for example and how many people read my message.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because I feel overly worried about many things when I chat in a group, for example, how many people read my message.

'One people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; the singular form 'person' should be used. Also, 'over worried' should be 'overly worried' to correctly use the adverb. These singular/plural and adverb usage errors affect grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer communicating face to face because I want to the earth's face and I fear there's tension and feeling.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because I want to see the person's face and I fear there is tension and feelings.

The phrase 'I want to the earth's face' is incorrect and unclear; it likely intends 'I want to see the person's face'. Also, 'there's tension and feeling' should be 'there is tension and feelings' for clarity. Prepositions and word choice errors cause confusion.

× No I don't because I'm to argue with friends is very hard for me who umm like it takes many times and many power.

✓ No, I don't because arguing with friends is very hard for me; it takes a lot of time and energy.

The phrase 'I'm to argue' is incorrect modal verb usage; it should be 'arguing' as a gerund. Also, 'many times' should be 'a lot of time' and 'many power' should be 'a lot of energy'. Correct modal verb and quantifier usage improve sentence clarity and correctness.