Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, I absolutely admire chatting with friends and I really relish it because it provides new insights. It, uh, makes you lose track of time. You're so occupied with chatting, You gain, uh, new information and a lot of knowledge and I think it's very healthy.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
I usually chat about new recipes as I love experimenting with food and I have friends who share the same interest, so most of our conversations or chats are about new food items, recipes, dishes, and uh, exploring new food options.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
Personally I prefer one-on-one conversations. I believe they are more uh, engaging and uh, you get to know the other person quite well as compared to group conversations. They are very general and they don't build such strong connections.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I definitely prefer communication that is face to face over social media any day and anytime I think it provides a personal touch. You can look at the other person and notice their body language, their gestures, their facial expressions, and I think it's a great way to chat.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Generally I don't argue with my friends or anybody else for that matter, but, uh, there are sometimes when, uh, arguments do happen over, uh, trivial topics, but uh, I try to resolve the arguments, uh, at the earliest because I believe there is no point in carrying them forward.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is enthusiastic and shows your opinion clearly, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'you gain new information and a lot of knowledge' which mean the same. Also, keep your sentences concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me gain new insights and knowledge. Moreover, I often lose track of time when we talk, which shows how engaging our conversations are.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but avoid repeating similar words like 'recipes' and 'food items' multiple times. Also, try to reduce filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.
예시: I usually chat about new recipes because I love experimenting with food. Since my friends share this interest, we often discuss different dishes and explore new culinary options together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 78.0제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity and use linking words to connect your ideas better.
예시: Personally, I prefer one-on-one conversations because they are more engaging. Additionally, you get to know the other person better, unlike group chats which tend to be more general and less personal.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 85.0제안: Your answer is well-structured and detailed. To improve, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect your ideas more smoothly and avoid repeating 'I think' multiple times.
예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it provides a personal touch. You can observe the other person's body language, gestures, and facial expressions, which makes the conversation more meaningful.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is honest but contains many filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to be more concise and use linking words such as 'however' and 'therefore' to make your answer coherent and natural.
예시: Generally, I don't argue with my friends; however, sometimes disagreements occur over trivial matters. Therefore, I try to resolve them quickly because I believe it's pointless to hold grudges.
문법
× You're so occupied with chatting, You gain, uh, new information and a lot of knowledge and I think it's very healthy.
✓ You're so occupied with chatting that you gain new information and a lot of knowledge, and I think it's very healthy.
The original sentence is a run-on sentence with improper punctuation and conjunction use. Adding 'that' clarifies the cause-effect relationship and proper commas separate the clauses, improving sentence structure.
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