Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“try to sharing”应为“try to share”，并且表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口头语，使表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. I usually share interesting news or stories online to keep in touch and maintain our connection.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“We usually sharing”应为“We usually share”，且表达不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词，丰富细节，使表达更具体和连贯。

예시: We usually share stories about our daily lives or events at work. By doing this, I feel closer to my friends and maintain a strong connection with them.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I prefer chat”应为“I prefer to chat”，且表达略显重复。建议注意动词形式，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer to chat with one friend or a small group of two or three people because I am not very outgoing. In small groups, we can have deeper and more thoughtful conversations.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“the verb is not enough”应为“words are not enough”，“I TA contact”不明确。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达观点，并注意语法正确。

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because words alone are not enough to express ideas. Gestures and eye contact help us understand each other's emotions better.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，句子结构不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并补充具体细节使回答完整。

예시: It depends on the topic. If we discuss serious matters and I have a different opinion, I might argue with my friends because it can help us understand each other better.

× I try to sharing news stories, uh, just gospel online, uh, whatever I can remember uh, through this way I can connect it to them, keep a regular contact.

✓ I try to share news stories, uh, just gospel online, uh, whatever I can remember uh, through this way I can connect it to them, keep a regular contact.

动词try后面应接动词原形或不定式to do，而不是动名词-ing形式。这里应使用不定式to share。

× We usually sharing our stories, uh, in daily life or something happened in our company, something like that.

✓ We usually share our stories, uh, in daily life or something happened in our company, something like that.

副词usually后面应接动词原形share，而不是动名词sharing。

× I prefer chat with only one friend or just a small group of friends like two or three people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend or just a small group of friends like two or three people.

动词prefer后面应接不定式to do，这里应为prefer to chat。

× I'm not very outgoing person so stay in a large group of people make me feel uncomfortable and in a in a small group we can communication deeply and thoughtful.

✓ I'm not a very outgoing person, so staying in a large group of people makes me feel uncomfortable, and in a small group we can communicate deeply and thoughtfully.

缺少冠词a；stay应改为动名词形式staying作主语；主谓不一致，make应为makes；communication应为动词communicate；thoughtful应为副词thoughtfully。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Definitely face to face communication.

✓ Definitely face-to-face communication.

face-to-face作为复合形容词，需用连字符连接。

× I always thought the verb is not enough to express 1's idea.

✓ I always thought the verb is not enough to express one's idea.

数字1应为代词one's，表示“某人的”。

× The number uh like gesture I TA contact is really important during the communication.

✓ The number, uh, like gestures and eye contact are really important during communication.

原句表达不清，number应为gestures（手势），I TA contact应为eye contact（眼神交流），且主谓一致需用复数are。

× When we are face to face we can easily to get their emotion better.

✓ When we are face to face, we can easily get their emotions better.

动词get后不应加to；emotion应为复数emotions；句中缺少逗号。

× If there is a serious topic like we are discussing something, I think I will argue with them.

✓ If there is a serious topic, like when we are discussing something, I think I will argue with them.

缺少连词when引导时间状语从句，使句子更通顺。

× If my idea is different and I think it's very helpful to for both of us to enter the scene and we can, especially we can.

✓ If my idea is different, I think it's very helpful for both of us to express our views, especially because we can learn from each other.

原句结构混乱，表达不完整，需补充完整句意并调整语序。