Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long day at school.

제안: Bạn trả lời thiếu mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ, câu trả lời cũng không rõ ràng và có phần lộn xộn. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: We usually talk about entertainment news and sports events because I find them interesting. Also, we often discuss shows from Cartoon Network, which reminds me of my childhood.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, đồng thời phần cuối câu không hoàn chỉnh và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu trả lời để truyền đạt ý một cách hiệu quả.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share anything, like news about Archer or current events. It feels more personal and comfortable.

제안: Bạn sử dụng từ 'searchable' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này và câu trả lời có phần lặp lại. Bạn nên chọn từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more interactive and allows us to express our feelings clearly.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn cần luyện tập cách xây dựng câu hoàn chỉnh, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we misunderstand each other or have different opinions about homework or interests.

× I really I really enjoy have a having a conversation with my friends because when I chatting, when I talking to them I feel relaxed and all I'm going after a long day at school.

✓ I really enjoy having a conversation with my friends because when I chat, when I talk to them I feel relaxed and refreshed after a long day at school.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'having'. Also, 'chatting' and 'talking' should be in base form 'chat' and 'talk' after 'when I'. The phrase 'all I'm going' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'refreshed' to convey the intended meaning.

× Well, we all well, we usually chat about entertainment news, entertainment news and sports event because because they are all my favorite, because they are all my friends and I favorite.

✓ Well, we usually chat about entertainment news and sports events because they are all my favorites.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect conjunction use. 'Because they are all my friends and I favorite' is unclear and incorrect. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and clarifies meaning.

× And also we and also we really love to talk about Cartoon Network too, because it is because it is my childhood.

✓ Also, we really love to talk about Cartoon Network because it is part of my childhood.

Repetition of 'because it is' is unnecessary. The phrase 'my childhood' needs a preposition to clarify the relationship, so 'part of my childhood' is appropriate.

× Personally, I prefer chat with only one friend rather rather than chat with the group of people because when I talk with only one friend, I can share any things about anything with her like Archer ******* or domestic news or international news.

✓ Personally, I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than chatting with a group of people because when I talk with only one friend, I can share anything with her like Archer ******* or domestic news or international news.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' should be used. Also, 'any things about anything' is redundant; 'anything' suffices. 'The group of people' should be 'a group of people' for general reference.

× Also, when I talk to my best friend, uh, I feel that. I feel, I feel, I feel.

✓ Also, when I talk to my best friend, I feel comfortable and understood.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. Adding a clear feeling expression completes the thought.

× Absolutely. I prefer to come to communicate face to face because it is searchable and interactive.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer to communicate face to face because it is searchable and interactive.

The phrase 'prefer to come to communicate' is incorrect; 'prefer to communicate' is correct. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' but is acceptable as is.

× Also, we can talk. We can talk lively to whatever we like or we don't like.

✓ Also, we can talk lively about whatever we like or don't like.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'about' is appropriate when discussing topics. The sentence is also repetitive; combining into one sentence improves clarity.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends because we all miss and miss because we all misunderstood because we understood misunderstood another when, when and we also And sometimes we have a Givens on homework or something we don't really or something my friends are keen on, but I'm but I'm not really like.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends because we all misunderstand each other. Also, sometimes we have disagreements about homework or things my friends are keen on, but I don't really like.

The sentence has tense confusion and unclear phrases. 'Miss and miss' is incorrect; 'misunderstand' is the correct verb. 'Givens' is incorrect; 'disagreements' fits the context. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.