Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use more varied vocabulary to express emotions.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share both my happiness and sadness, which makes me feel really connected and joyful.

제안: Avoid vague words like 'different stuffs' and use more specific vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and avoid redundancy.

예시: I usually talk about education and various topics. Additionally, I share my feelings, whether I'm sad or happy, and discuss festivals and new experiences I've had recently.

제안: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use linking phrases to compare your preferences clearly.

예시: I enjoy chatting one-on-one with a friend because it's relaxing, but group chats with old school friends bring a different kind of happiness, so I like both.

제안: Make your answer more complete by directly addressing the question and using linking words. Also, avoid filler words like 'so' and be more specific.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication with my old school friends because it allows us to share laughter and reminisce about old experiences more personally.

제안: Avoid informal phrases like 'Do you know what?' and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and use more precise vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we have different opinions, which naturally leads to disagreements.

× Mostly I chat about education and different stuffs.

✓ Mostly I chat about education and different stuff.

The word 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'stuffs' is incorrect. Use 'stuff' to refer to various things collectively.

× I express my sadness, sorrowness.

✓ I express my sadness and sorrow.

The word 'sorrowness' is not a correct English word. The correct noun form is 'sorrow'. Also, use 'and' to connect two nouns properly.

× I share about the festivals and new experience I get in my life.

✓ I share about the festivals and new experiences I get in my life.

The noun 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to agree with the plural 'festivals' and to indicate multiple experiences.

× But on another hand, chatting with chatting in the group with old school friends is different level of happiness, so I prefer both.

✓ But on the other hand, chatting in a group with old school friends brings a different level of happiness, so I prefer both.

The phrase 'on another hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on the other hand'. The repetition 'chatting with chatting' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'different level of happiness' needs an article 'a' before 'different'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× So if it's my old school friend, of course I prefer talking face to face, meeting them and laughing with them and everything.

✓ So if it's my old school friend, of course I prefer talking face-to-face, meeting them, laughing with them, and everything.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list for clarity.

× Not everyone has same opinion.

✓ Not everyone has the same opinion.

The phrase 'same opinion' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× So due to the class in opinions we argue sometimes.

✓ So due to the clash in opinions, we argue sometimes.

The word 'class' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'clash' meaning conflict. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase for clarity.