Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、言い淀みや繰り返しが多く、文法的な誤りもあります。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の正確さを向上させましょう。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends. Recently, I haven't chatted much because my friends live far away, but I really enjoy talking with them.

제안: 語彙の選択が不適切で、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な話題を明確にし、適切な語彙を使う練習をしましょう。

예시: I usually talk about our career goals and relationships. My friends enjoy chatting and often teach me new things.

제안: 繰り返しや言い淀みが多いので、簡潔で流暢な表現を目指しましょう。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いです。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it easier to express myself than in a group.

제안: 理由を述べる際に、より自然な表現と接続詞を使い、文を滑らかに繋げましょう。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I don't like using smartphones much, and face-to-face conversations feel more comfortable.

제안: 意味が不明瞭な部分があり、語彙の選択も適切ではありません。理由を明確にし、適切な語彙を使って表現力を高めましょう。

예시: Not really. I usually argue with my family and partner, but I rarely argue with friends because I hesitate to cause conflicts.

× my friends is far

✓ my friends are far

The subject 'friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I usually touch about umm purpose of job and the love umm

✓ I usually talk about the purpose of jobs and love

The verb 'touch' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'talk'. Also, 'purpose of job' should be pluralized to 'purpose of jobs' and 'the love' should be 'love' without 'the'.

× My friends really like chatting so they teach me a lot

✓ My friends really like chatting, so they teach me a lot

A comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× so it is easy to me for me to talk

✓ so it is easy for me to talk

The phrase 'easy to me for me' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'easy for me'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective.

× to face to face is more comfortable

✓ face-to-face communication is more comfortable

The phrase 'to face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face-to-face communication' or 'communicating face-to-face'.

× I argue with family and partner

✓ I argue with my family and partner

Possessive pronouns are needed before 'family' and 'partner' to specify whose family and partner.

× I umm, hesitate to uh, divide

✓ I hesitate to argue

The verb 'divide' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'argue'.