Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains filler words like 'uh' and some redundancy. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use more varied vocabulary to express your thoughts clearly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay updated about each other's lives and share experiences.

제안: Your answer is a bit long and unclear due to filler words and repetition. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

예시: Since we are busy with our professional and personal lives, we don't chat daily. However, whenever we meet, we usually discuss recent updates about our lives and activities.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure.

예시: I prefer chatting with a small group of close friends, about five people, because we have a strong bond that started back in college.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide complete, clear sentences.

예시: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better connection. However, in emergencies or when we are far apart, I use social media to stay in touch, like when I visited my brother recently.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words and avoiding redundancy. Also, explain your opinion with specific reasons.

예시: I sometimes argue with my friends because it helps us express our opinions and strengthens our friendship by resolving differences.

× We are almost, uh, gossiping with each other, like what they are doing in their life.

✓ We are almost, uh, gossiping with each other about what they are doing in their lives.

The phrase 'like what they are doing in their life' is incorrect because 'like' is not the appropriate preposition here. The correct preposition is 'about' to indicate the topic of gossip. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' because it refers to multiple people.

× She is doing this and she is doing this.

✓ They are doing this and they are doing that.

The original sentence uses 'She' which is singular, but the context refers to multiple friends. Therefore, the pronoun should be plural 'They' and the verb should agree accordingly.

× Usually we are so busy in our, uh, professional life and personal lives, so we don't have that much of time to meet, uh, each day or we have to talk or chat each day or like everything we have to chat or something like.

✓ Usually we are so busy with our professional and personal lives, so we don't have much time to meet or talk or chat every day.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'with' when talking about being busy. Also, 'that much of time' is incorrect; it should be 'much time'. The sentence is also simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So whenever we have meet, we, uh, usually chat about whatever is, what is the update of their lives, what they are doing.

✓ So whenever we meet, we usually chat about the updates in their lives and what they are doing.

The phrase 'have meet' is incorrect; it should be 'meet'. Also, 'what is the update of their lives' is awkward; 'updates in their lives' is more natural. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I'm very extraordinary person but when we are talking about my friends so I prefer small group of friends.

✓ I'm a very extraordinary person, but when it comes to my friends, I prefer a small group of friends.

The original sentence lacks articles 'a' before 'very extraordinary person' and 'small group'. Also, 'when we are talking about my friends' is better expressed as 'when it comes to my friends' for naturalness.

× I believe that it is a big group or small group but each we have to connected with our heart as I have a small group like a 5 people of friends we have and we are connected since we are in the college like.

✓ I believe whether it is a big group or a small group, we all have to be connected at heart. I have a small group of about five friends, and we have been connected since college.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing articles before 'big group' and 'small group', incorrect phrase 'each we have to connected' corrected to 'we all have to be connected', and 'a 5 people of friends' corrected to 'a small group of about five friends'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Usually I prefer to communicate face to face because it's connect easily with each other.

✓ Usually I prefer to communicate face to face because it connects easily with each other.

The verb 'connect' needs to be in third person singular form 'connects' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'face to face' is correct as is.

× last two months I have been visited to my brother's place, which is far away from the.

✓ Last two months, I visited my brother's place, which is far away.

The phrase 'have been visited to' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'I visited'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and is corrected for clarity.

× I almost argue every time with my friends.

✓ I almost always argue with my friends.

The phrase 'almost argue every time' is awkward. 'Almost always argue' is the correct modal adverb placement to express frequency.

× I think it gives me a kick and or it reminds me that we are friends if we don't fight with each other, we don't have we don't get too much close.

✓ I think it gives me a kick, or it reminds me that we are friends. If we don't fight with each other, we don't get too close.

The conjunction 'and or' is incorrect; it should be either 'and' or 'or'. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for grammatical accuracy.

× With my friends, we have to argue, we have to prove ourselves, we have to take points in front of our friends.

✓ With my friends, we have to argue, prove ourselves, and make our points in front of each other.

The phrase 'take points' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make our points'. Also, 'in front of our friends' is better expressed as 'in front of each other' to indicate mutual interaction.