Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa, motto shizen de, jisho teki ni kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Fuyou na hesitations ya kurikaeshi o sakete, bunshou o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends both online and in person. We usually talk about various topics in our group chats.' to iu fuu ni.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends both online and in person. We usually talk about various topics in our group chats.

제안: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'We usually talk about social media rumors and give each other advice on improving our daily lives and making good decisions.' to iu fuu ni, rikai o tasukeru you ni shite kudasai.

예시: We usually talk about social media rumors and give each other advice on improving our daily lives and making good decisions.

제안: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, fuyou na hesitations o sakete kudasai. Mata, rikai o tasukeru tame ni, 'I enjoy chatting with both groups and individuals. When I feel lonely, I join group chats because they are exciting and interesting. But if I want to discuss something serious, I prefer talking to one friend.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

예시: I enjoy chatting with both groups and individuals. When I feel lonely, I join group chats because they are exciting and interesting. But if I want to discuss something serious, I prefer talking to one friend.

제안: Kotae wa motto meikaku ni shite, fuyou na hesitations o sakete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I prefer communicating via social media because all my friends live overseas. We often discuss how to solve daily problems.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because all my friends live overseas. We often discuss how to solve daily problems.

제안: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, we sometimes argue about movie characters and novels. We discuss which side or idea is better.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue about movie characters and novels. We discuss which side or idea is better.

× I always chat with a group on a pers only personal umm, we talk about many various things, various app.

✓ I always chat with a group of people personally; we talk about many various things and various apps.

The phrase 'a group on a pers only personal' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'a group of people personally' to correctly express chatting with a group of people in person. Also, 'various app' should be pluralized to 'various apps' to match the plural quantifier 'various'.

× It has many different things like uh, chatting about, uh, some rumors on the social media and advising each other how to improve our daily life and how to be how to make our life successful.

✓ It includes many different things like chatting about some rumors on social media and advising each other on how to improve our daily lives and how to make our lives successful.

The phrase 'It has many different things like' is awkward; 'It includes many different things like' is better. 'On the social media' should be 'on social media' because 'social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'our daily life' and 'our life' should be pluralized to 'our daily lives' and 'our lives' to match the plural subject 'each other'.

× I do both uh, when I feel lonely, I go to the group shop and and chat with them.

✓ I do both. When I feel lonely, I go to the group chat and chat with them.

The phrase 'go to the group shop' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the group chat' to indicate joining a group conversation. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× It feel like very exciting and very like umm interesting because various people are, are in the group and when I feel like I want to discuss something, I only went.

✓ It feels very exciting and very interesting because various people are in the group, and when I feel like I want to discuss something, I only go.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The phrase 'I only went' is past tense and inconsistent with the present tense context; it should be 'I only go'.

× All my friends are on the UMM in the overseas, so uh, I usually chat on social media, umm about discourse, how to face a problem in our daily life in communicating our own ground Friends, yes.

✓ All my friends are overseas, so I usually chat on social media about how to face problems in our daily lives and communicate with our close friends.

The phrase 'on the UMM in the overseas' is unclear and incorrect; 'overseas' alone suffices. 'Discourse' is awkward here; 'how to face problems' is clearer. 'Our daily life' should be plural 'our daily lives'. 'Communicating our own ground Friends' is unclear; 'communicate with our close friends' is better.

× Usually we argue about various things like about, uh, discussing movie characters and uh, sometimes we discuss about, uh, the novel and uh, we often argue that which side is the best and which ideas are.

✓ Usually we argue about various things like movie characters, and sometimes we discuss novels. We often argue about which side is the best and which ideas are better.

The repeated use of 'about' after 'argue' and 'discuss' is redundant; 'argue about' and 'discuss' do not need 'about' after them. 'Discussing movie characters' should be 'movie characters' as the object. 'The novel' should be plural 'novels' if general. The last sentence was incomplete and unclear; it was corrected to a complete sentence.