Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, I do like chatting with friends. I mean, they listen to me and they care about me. They give me advice on what I'm asking.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
I usually chat about makeup, skin care and fashion with my friends because me and my friends have common interests and be like fashion, makeup and all those *****.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's more understanding and and it's not a chaos.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I prefer communicating face to face because it's more peaceful and less chaotic and more, you know, advanced.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
No, I don't argue with my friends 'cause we all have same interests and same mindset, so there's nothing to argue about.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly.
예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because they listen attentively and offer helpful advice when I need it.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to be more specific and avoid filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.
예시: I usually chat about makeup, skincare, and fashion since my friends and I share these common interests.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition. Also, explain why one-on-one chatting is better for you with linking words.
예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's easier to understand each other and the conversation is less chaotic.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains vague expressions like 'you know' and 'more advanced'. Try to be specific and avoid fillers. Use linking words to connect your ideas.
예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for clearer understanding and feels more personal than social media.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is direct but could be improved by using more formal language and providing a bit more explanation with linking words.
예시: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar interests and mindsets, which helps us avoid conflicts.
문법
× I usually chat about makeup, skin care and fashion with my friends because me and my friends have common interests and be like fashion, makeup and all those *****.
✓ I usually chat about makeup, skin care and fashion with my friends because my friends and I have common interests like fashion, makeup and all those things.
The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the sentence; the correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, 'be like' is incorrect here; it should be 'like' to express similarity. The phrase 'all those *****' is unclear and should be replaced with 'all those things' for clarity.
× I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's more understanding and and it's not a chaos.
✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it is more understanding and it is not chaotic.
The phrase 'more understanding' is acceptable but could be clearer; however, 'it's not a chaos' is incorrect because 'chaos' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article 'a'. Instead, use the adjective 'chaotic' to describe the situation.
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