Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e clear topic sentence dite paren, ar sentence gulo ke sohoje bujha jabe emon vabe structure korte hobe. Apnar answer e kichu sentence onek confused ar redundant. Apni chesta korun prothome direct question er uttor dite, tarpor kichu specific karon ba example dite. Linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy.

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is a good way to stay connected. For example, we share our daily experiences and support each other. Therefore, chatting helps us maintain our friendship effectively.

제안: Apnar uttor e prothome direct topic sentence dite hobe, tarpor specific details dite hobe. Apnar answer e kichu sentence onek confused ar redundant. Apni chesta korun clear ar simple sentence use korte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily routines and plans. For instance, we discuss when we will meet or what activities we will do. This helps us stay updated about each other's lives.

제안: Apni answer e clear topic sentence dite paren, ar sentence gulo ke sohoje bujha jabe emon vabe structure korte hobe. Apnar answer e kichu sentence onek confused ar redundant. Apni chesta korun prothome direct question er uttor dite, tarpor kichu specific karon ba example dite. Linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more fun and we can share different ideas. However, sometimes I like chatting one-on-one with a close friend for a deeper conversation.

제안: Apnar uttor e prothome direct topic sentence dite hobe, tarpor specific details dite hobe. Apnar answer e kichu sentence onek confused ar incomplete. Apni chesta korun clear ar simple sentence use korte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Example diye uttor ke boro korte paren.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better understanding through body language. Although social media is convenient, meeting in person makes conversations more meaningful and enjoyable.

제안: Apni answer e clear topic sentence dite paren, ar sentence gulo ke sohoje bujha jabe emon vabe structure korte hobe. Apnar answer e kichu sentence onek confused ar redundant. Apni chesta korun prothome direct question er uttor dite, tarpor kichu specific karon ba example dite. Linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy.

예시: I do not argue with my friends often, but sometimes we disagree when someone makes a mistake. For example, if a friend is late without informing, I might get upset. However, I try to resolve conflicts quickly to keep our friendship strong.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends that's why I think it is the best way to spend our time and me and my friend anyone need to know how we and that's why I like it is the best way for all conversation.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends. That's why I think it is the best way to spend our time. My friend and I think everyone needs to know how we communicate, and that's why I like it; it is the best way for all conversations.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with unclear structure and missing connectors. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'me and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' as the subject of the sentence.

× Yes, usually I talk about with my friends in chat when I go outside and when he come and what the what her daily routine this type of things.

✓ Yes, usually I chat with my friends when I go outside, and we talk about what he does and her daily routine, these types of things.

The phrase 'talk about with' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with' or 'talk about'. Also, 'when he come' should be 'when he comes' to agree with third person singular. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, usually I talk about with my friends in chat when I go outside and when he come and what the what her daily routine this type of things.

✓ Yes, usually I chat with my friends when I go outside, and we talk about what he does and her daily routine, these types of things.

The verb 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'.

× Usually I talk about talk with my friends in the chat that's why I think it is the best way to conversation each other.

✓ Usually, I talk with my friends in chat. That's why I think it is the best way to have conversations with each other.

The original sentence has redundancy ('talk about talk') and incorrect phrase 'to conversation each other'. Correcting to 'talk with' and 'have conversations with each other' improves clarity and grammar.

× I think if I chat with a group people, it is a very funnable time and enjoyable time when we are talking about each other, about their daily routine and then we should talk with another another site like me and my friend chat only he and me.

✓ I think if I chat with a group of people, it is a very fun and enjoyable time when we talk about each other and their daily routines. Then, we also chat one-on-one, like my friend and I chatting alone.

The phrase 'group people' should be 'group of people'. 'Funnable' is not a word; 'fun' is correct. 'Another another site' is unclear and corrected to express the intended meaning. 'Me and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' as the subject.

× I think if I chat with a group people, it is a very funnable time and enjoyable time when we are talking about each other, about their daily routine and then we should talk with another another site like me and my friend chat only he and me.

✓ I think if I chat with a group of people, it is a very fun and enjoyable time when we talk about each other and their daily routines. Then, we also chat one-on-one, like my friend and I chatting alone.

The pronouns 'me and my friend' are incorrectly used as subjects; the correct form is 'my friend and I'.

× I think it is the best way to stay home and conversation each other, but mostly useful and best way to conversation in in face to face because when we go when we see it face to face, this is the best way thinking about and fun about time and.

✓ I think staying at home and conversing with each other is good, but the most useful and best way is to have conversations face-to-face because when we meet face-to-face, it is the best way to think and have fun together.

The phrase 'conversation each other' is incorrect; it should be 'converse with each other' or 'have conversations'. 'In in face to face' is incorrect; 'face-to-face' is used without preposition here. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Not too much but sometime I argue with my friends do anything he do wrong these type things.

✓ Not too much, but sometimes I argue with my friends if they do something wrong, these types of things.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with third person singular 'he' or 'they'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× Not too much but sometime I argue with my friends do anything he do wrong these type things.

✓ Not too much, but sometimes I argue with my friends if they do something wrong, these types of things.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used when referring to 'friends' (plural). It should be 'they'.

× Not too much but sometime I argue with my friends do anything he do wrong these type things.

✓ Not too much, but sometimes I argue with my friends if they do something wrong, these types of things.

The phrase 'these type things' should be 'these types of things' to correctly express plural quantification.