Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and clear, but it is a bit repetitive with phrases like "I am able to" repeated. Try to use varied sentence structures and avoid redundancy to make your answer more effective. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends both in person and online. It’s part of my daily routine because it allows me to share stories, laugh together, and strengthen our bond.

제안: Your answer covers the topic but is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases like "it's the only thing you often talk about right now."

예시: We usually chat about our crushes and boyfriends. For example, we discuss small interactions with them or sometimes the arguments our friends have with their partners.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, be specific about why group chats are beneficial.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because it feels like brainstorming. Everyone can share their feelings and opinions about different situations, which helps me learn from others.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Make sure to finish your thoughts clearly. Also, try to add linking words and more specific reasons to support your preference.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language. This helps me understand the person better and build a stronger connection.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, we sometimes have small arguments, usually due to misunderstandings. For example, when we fail to explain our perspectives clearly, it leads to disagreements.

× This is because I am able to share my stories, I am able to laugh with them, connect with them and really spend time.

✓ This is because I am able to share my stories, laugh with them, connect with them, and really spend time.

The sentence has unnecessary repetition of 'I am able to' which makes it awkward. In English, when listing multiple actions by the same subject, it's better to use the verb once and then list the other verbs without repeating the auxiliary verb. This improves fluency and clarity.

× There are so many things to talk about when I'm with them, but it's usually about our crushes and boyfriends, and it's the only thing you often talk about right now.

✓ There are so many things to talk about when I'm with them, but it's usually about our crushes and boyfriends, and it's the only thing we often talk about right now.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here because the speaker is referring to themselves and their friends collectively. The correct pronoun is 'we' to indicate the group including the speaker.

× Sometimes the small interactions with their crushes and sometimes the arguments of our friends with their boyfriends.

✓ Sometimes the small interactions with our crushes and sometimes the arguments of our friends with their boyfriends.

The pronoun 'their' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. Since the speaker is talking about their own group, 'our' should be used instead of 'their' to maintain consistency and clarity.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because it's more like the brainstorming conversation when each of you where each of you can share whatever they're feeling, what they, what they think about this type of situation, what they choose to do in this type of situation.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because it's more like a brainstorming conversation where each of us can share whatever we're feeling, what we think about this type of situation, and what we choose to do in this type of situation.

The original sentence has redundancy ('each of you where each of you') and inconsistent pronouns ('you' and 'they'). The correction removes redundancy and uses consistent first-person plural pronouns ('each of us', 'we', 'we're') to match the speaker's perspective. Also, 'a brainstorming conversation' is more natural than 'the brainstorming conversation'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because in this way I can see their facial expression and body language.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because in this way I can see their facial expressions and body language.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb ('face-to-face'). Also, 'facial expression' should be plural ('facial expressions') because people show multiple expressions during communication.

× It also helps visualize and take into account the.

✓ It also helps me visualize and take into account the details.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'take into account the'. Adding 'me' clarifies the subject of 'helps', and adding 'details' completes the thought, making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× For example when we couldn't explain our perspective to each other and we go argue.

✓ For example, when we couldn't explain our perspective to each other and we argue.

The phrase 'we go argue' is incorrect. The correct form is 'we argue' to indicate the action. Also, adding a comma after 'For example' improves readability.