Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce the use of filler words such as 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech sound more natural and fluent. Also, aim to complete your sentences clearly and avoid trailing off. For example, you could say: "Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows us to exchange ideas, strengthen our bonds, and relax after a stressful day."

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows us to exchange ideas, strengthen our bonds, and relax after a stressful day.

제안: Focus on organising your answer with clear linking words and avoid repetition. Use specific examples to make your answer more engaging. For instance, you could say: "We usually discuss current affairs or events from the past week, such as interesting incidents at work or funny moments on the bus. These conversations are always enjoyable."

예시: We usually discuss current affairs or events from the past week, such as interesting incidents at work or funny moments on the bus. These conversations are always enjoyable.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid hesitation. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain your preference. For example: "I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable expressing myself in a one-on-one conversation rather than in a group."

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable expressing myself in a one-on-one conversation rather than in a group.

제안: Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Be specific and use linking words to explain your preference. For example: "I prefer face-to-face communication because it improves communication skills and helps avoid misunderstandings, as you can see the other person's expressions clearly."

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it improves communication skills and helps avoid misunderstandings, as you can see the other person's expressions clearly.

제안: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example: "I don't argue often, but if I believe someone is wrong, I will express my opinion firmly while also trying to understand their point of view."

예시: I don't argue often, but if I believe someone is wrong, I will express my opinion firmly while also trying to understand their point of view.

× Yes, I do because it's a good idea to, uh, exchange, uh, ideas and it also, uh, enhance the bond between the person, especially uh, in between friends and also a great idea to unwind, uh, after a stressful uh.

✓ Yes, I do because it's a good idea to, uh, exchange, uh, ideas and it also, uh, enhances the bond between people, especially, uh, between friends and is also a great idea to unwind, uh, after a stressful time.

The verb 'enhance' should be in the third person singular form 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'the person' is incorrect here; it should be plural 'people' to match the context. 'In between friends' is better expressed as 'between friends'. The phrase 'after a stressful uh' is incomplete; adding 'time' completes the meaning.

× Well, most of the time we talk about current affairs or things happened last week, it might be from the workplace or something funny things happened, uh, in the in bus or in between, uh, colleague.

✓ Well, most of the time we talk about current affairs or things that happened last week; it might be from the workplace or something funny that happened, uh, in the bus or among colleagues.

The phrase 'things happened' needs the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clause properly. 'In the in bus' is incorrect; it should be 'in the bus'. 'In between colleague' is incorrect; 'among colleagues' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate multiple colleagues.

× So it is always fun to chat with each other.

✓ So it is always fun to chat with each other.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain any errors related to singular or plural usage.

× I prefer, uh, one person, one person or one friend because I'm with introvert.

✓ I prefer, uh, one person, one friend because I'm an introvert.

The phrase 'I'm with introvert' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I'm an introvert' to indicate the speaker's personality type. Also, 'one person, one person or one friend' is redundant; 'one person, one friend' suffices.

× I'm not, I won't be comfortable, uh, in talking in a group because I'm big, uh, concerned about my, uh, words, how they feel or.

✓ I'm not, I won't be comfortable, uh, talking in a group because I'm very, uh, concerned about my, uh, words and how they might be perceived.

The phrase 'comfortable in talking in a group' should be 'comfortable talking in a group' without the preposition 'in' before 'talking'. 'I'm big concerned' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm very concerned'. The phrase 'how they feel or' is incomplete and unclear; it is better expressed as 'how they might be perceived'.

× I think it's always better to talk festivals face to face.

✓ I think it's always better to talk face to face.

The word 'festivals' is incorrectly used here and seems out of context. The correct phrase is 'talk face to face' without 'festivals'.

× It will enhance the uh, communication skill as well. Then umm, to avoid any misunderstandings between people and will give a clear idea uh, about, especially if any.

✓ It will enhance, uh, communication skills as well, then, umm, avoid any misunderstandings between people and will give a clear idea, especially if there are any.

'Communication skill' should be plural 'communication skills'. The phrase 'to avoid any misunderstandings' is better as 'avoid any misunderstandings' to maintain parallel structure. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'if there are any' clarifies the meaning.

× Not quite often, but sometimes depends upon the situation.

✓ Not quite often, but sometimes it depends on the situation.

The sentence lacks a subject for the verb 'depends'. Adding 'it' as the subject corrects the sentence. Also, 'depends upon' can be simplified to 'depends on' for natural usage.

× If somebody is saying wrong, but I know that's not right, I will definitely, I will argue and I stay with, uh, my point, uh, if I'm sure that's correct.

✓ If somebody is saying something wrong, but I know that's not right, I will definitely argue and stand by, uh, my point, uh, if I'm sure it's correct.

The phrase 'saying wrong' is incomplete; it should be 'saying something wrong'. 'I stay with my point' is better expressed as 'I stand by my point'. Also, 'if I'm sure that's correct' is better as 'if I'm sure it's correct' for clarity.

× So I will try to understand other.

✓ So I will try to understand others.

The word 'other' is incorrect here; the plural pronoun 'others' is needed to refer to other people. This corrects the sentence structure and meaning.