Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on using correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it lifts my mood. They understand my sense of humor and never judge me, which makes our conversations very comfortable and enjoyable.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid vague phrases. Also, be specific about the topics you discuss.

예시: I don't have many friends because I prefer quality over quantity. I usually chat with two or three close friends about personal matters, family issues, and events happening in our lives.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct prepositions and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because I am quite introverted. Therefore, I feel uncomfortable opening up to people I don't know well.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid repetition and finish your thoughts. Use linking words to explain your situation clearly and provide a direct answer.

예시: It depends on the situation. Since my friend and I live in different cities, we usually communicate via social media. However, I prefer face-to-face communication when possible.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to understand the question fully before answering. Use complete sentences and avoid filler words. Provide a clear opinion with supporting details.

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because we respect each other's opinions. Although we have different perspectives, we try to agree and avoid conflicts.

× they are so much funny, like they understand my humor and they don't judge me, which is a great thing.

✓ they are so funny, like they understand my humor and they don't judge me, which is a great thing.

The phrase 'so much funny' is incorrect because 'funny' is an adjective and should be modified by 'so' instead of 'so much'. 'So much' is used with uncountable nouns or verbs, not adjectives. The correct form is 'so funny'. This is a common error in adjective modification.

× If you talk to someone who whom you don't judge, whom don't judge you.

✓ If you talk to someone who doesn't judge you, and you don't judge them.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'whom' and has unclear pronoun references. 'Who' is the correct subject pronoun here, and the verb must agree with the subject. Also, the sentence structure is confusing. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper subject-verb agreement and pronouns.

× I have not many friends.

✓ I don't have many friends.

The phrase 'I have not many friends' is ungrammatical in English. The correct negative form is 'I don't have many friends.' This is a common error in negation and quantifier usage with countable nouns.

× I have two or three friends I tried and I feel so much comfortable with them that I can talk about him.

✓ I have two or three friends I trust and I feel so comfortable with them that I can talk about anything.

The word 'tried' is incorrect; the intended word is 'trust'. Also, 'so much comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'so comfortable'. The pronoun 'him' is incorrect because it does not refer to a specific person and is inconsistent with 'friends' (plural). The sentence is corrected for verb choice, adjective usage, and pronoun reference.

× I prefer a chat with my only friend other than any group of people because I am a pretty much introvert person.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend rather than with a group of people because I am quite an introverted person.

The phrase 'my only friend other than any group of people' is awkward and incorrect. 'Prefer a chat' should be 'prefer to chat'. 'Pretty much introvert person' is incorrect; the correct form is 'quite an introverted person'. The sentence is corrected for verb form, preposition use, and adjective form.

× I don't feel like talking to people whom I don't know and it is very uncomfortable for me to open up with them suddenly.

✓ I don't feel like talking to people whom I don't know, and it is very uncomfortable for me to open up to them suddenly.

The phrase 'open up with them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'open up to them'. Also, the sentence is missing a comma before 'and'. The correction addresses preposition use and punctuation.

× So in recent times we just talk by social media, not face to face because as I tell you.

✓ So recently, we just talk via social media, not face to face, because as I told you.

The phrase 'talk by social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'via social media'. 'In recent times' is better expressed as 'recently'. Also, 'as I tell you' should be 'as I told you' to match past reference. The sentence is corrected for preposition use and tense consistency.