Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my best friend Rosie. We often have tea together and share stories, which I find very relaxing and enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and clearly explain the topics you discuss with your friends, using linking words to organise your ideas.

예시: I usually talk with my friends about my life and problems. They help me find solutions, which I really appreciate.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words and use linking phrases to explain your preference clearly.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one close friend because I find it easier to trust and share my feelings with them.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words and some awkward phrasing. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to make your answer smoother.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to understand each other better and connect on a deeper level.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

예시: I sometimes argue with my best friend because I believe it shows how much we care about each other, and it can be quite fun.

× I have many friends but among them my best friend Rosie.

✓ I have many friends but among them is my best friend Rosie.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and the complement. This is a 'There be' issue (ID 3), but since the problem is about singular/plural agreement and missing verb, it is best classified as singular and plural issue (ID 1). The correct sentence requires the verb 'is' to indicate that Rosie is one of the many friends.

× I have lots of gossiping so I love.

✓ I have lots of gossip that I love.

The word 'gossiping' is incorrectly used as a noun here. 'Gossip' is the correct noun form. The phrase 'I have lots of gossip that I love' is clearer and grammatically correct. The original sentence lacks clarity and proper noun usage.

× I love to chit chat with her in my free time, taking tea in my hand and chit chat with her.

✓ I love to chit chat with her in my free time, holding tea in my hand while chatting with her.

The phrase 'taking tea in my hand and chit chat with her' is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Taking tea' is not a common expression; 'holding tea' or 'having tea' is better. Also, 'chit chat' should be consistent in form. The sentence structure needs improvement for clarity and correctness.

× I often. Jet with my friends about my life, my problems, my solution where I where they they help me to find out the prevent to the problem in my life.

✓ I often chat with my friends about my life, my problems, and my solutions where they help me to find ways to prevent problems in my life.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words ('where I where they they'). 'Jet' is likely a typo for 'chat'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs to be rewritten for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I believe in trust, so I love to share my whole gossip or my whole feeling with my one best friend Rosie, because I I can't trust anyone easily.

✓ I believe in trust, so I love to share all my gossip or my feelings with my one best friend Rosie, because I can't trust anyone easily.

The phrase 'my whole gossip or my whole feeling' is awkward; 'all my gossip or my feelings' is more natural. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error. The pronoun usage and word choice need correction for naturalness and clarity.

× Rather than social media, I prefer to talk with my friend face to face because, uh, because in face to face condition, we can uh, understand each other word sentences easily and communicate with each other easily, uh, knowing each other.

✓ Rather than social media, I prefer to talk with my friend face to face because, in face-to-face situations, we can understand each other's words and sentences easily and communicate with each other better, getting to know each other.

The phrase 'in face to face condition' is incorrect; 'in face-to-face situations' is better. Also, 'each other word sentences' should be 'each other's words and sentences'. Prepositions and possessive forms need correction for grammatical accuracy.

× Everybody have their own opinion, but in my opinion, yes I do love arguing with not friends but with my best friend.

✓ Everybody has their own opinion, but in my opinion, yes I do love arguing not with friends but with my best friend.

'Everybody' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Also, the phrase 'arguing with not friends but with my best friend' is awkward; 'arguing not with friends but with my best friend' is clearer. Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure need correction.