Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达的意思不够清晰，句子结构有些混乱，建议使用更自然流畅的表达方式，并且避免重复。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it gives me strength and encouragement in my life.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且补充具体细节。

예시: Since my friend and I attend different universities, we often talk about our new teachers and classmates. Sometimes, we also share our feelings when we feel sad.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误（如代词使用错误），建议注意语法准确性，并适当丰富内容。

예시: Although I have many friends, I prefer chatting with my best friend because we have known each other for many years and share a deep friendship.

제안: 句子结构不够自然，时态和语法错误较多，建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Since we attend different universities, we often chat online. However, during summer or winter holidays, we prefer to meet face-to-face and talk a lot.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的句型和词汇，避免重复，并使表达更自然。

예시: No, I rarely argue with my best friend because we share similar opinions. We usually support each other instead of arguing.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend. Through our chatting I can feel power and they can.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends. Through our chatting I can feel power and they can.

这里“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，因为后文提到“they”，指代多个人，单数和复数不一致。

× My friend and I are in the different university, so many times we are talking about the new teachers or new classmates around us and we will chatting with about our new life sometimes when we feel sad or.

✓ My friend and I are in different universities, so many times we talk about the new teachers or new classmates around us and sometimes we chat about our new life when we feel sad.

“are talking”改为一般现在时“talk”，因为描述习惯动作；“will chatting”错误，应该用“chat”；“with about”搭配错误，应去掉“with”；句子不完整，需调整。

× My friend and I are in the different university, so many times we are talking about the new teachers or new classmates around us and we will chatting with about our new life sometimes when we feel sad or.

✓ My friend and I are in different universities, so many times we talk about the new teachers or new classmates around us and sometimes we chat about our new life when we feel sad.

“university”应为复数“universities”，因为指两个人分别在不同的大学。

× I have many friends but I always chat with my own best friend because we know each other for many years and we have a deep friendship so I prefer to chat with she.

✓ I have many friends but I always chat with my best friend because we have known each other for many years and we have a deep friendship so I prefer to chat with her.

“she”是主格，作宾语应使用宾格“her”；“know each other for many years”时态错误，应使用现在完成时“have known”。

× Because of we are in the different university, so many times we just chatting online but in the summer vacation or winter holiday we will choose to meet face to face and talking a lot.

✓ Because we are in different universities, many times we just chat online but in the summer vacation or winter holiday we choose to meet face to face and talk a lot.

“the different university”应为复数“different universities”，且不需要冠词“the”；“just chatting”应为一般现在时“just chat”；“will choose”改为一般现在时“choose”，保持时态一致；“talking”改为“talk”。

× No, I seldom argue with her because she's my best friend and we have the same opinion in almost everything. So therefore sometimes is she support me and I support her. We seldom argument.

✓ No, I seldom argue with her because she's my best friend and we have the same opinion on almost everything. So sometimes she supports me and I support her. We seldom argue.

“is she support me”语序错误，应为“she supports me”；“argument”是名词，动词应为“argue”；“in almost everything”介词用错，应为“on almost everything”。