Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Oh, almost in my free time, I can chatting with my friends, it helps me more relax and after the busy days and umm uh, I can uh, update, update information, related information through our through my friends.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
I always chat about with friends, especially in my free time. Umm, it helped me relax after a busy day and I can update, uh, the latest news from my friends. Update your life and.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I prefer to chat with one friends, uh, because uh, if I, umm, if, if I in a group, people, I, I, I'm difficult to follow the their story because I don't have more. I don't have much time to follow.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
It depends on who are the person I communicate with. Uh, for example, with my boyfriend, I, you know, I always want to face to face with him and uh, but in, in with my friend, I want to, uh, chat via social media than than.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
No, it's really seldom because I'm introvert person and I very friend, I am very friendly. So I if I have if I have a a work with my friend, I usually don't talk, don't talk anymore and.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, ví dụ như 'can chatting' nên là 'can chat'. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because it helps me relax after busy days and keeps me updated with the latest news.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 55.0제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại ý giống câu trước. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết.
예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily lives, recent events, and interesting news to stay connected and informed.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 50.0제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.
예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because in a group, it's hard for me to follow everyone's stories due to limited time.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 55.0제안: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác. Hãy dùng liên từ để nối ý và làm rõ sự khác biệt trong câu trả lời.
예시: It depends on the person. For example, I prefer face-to-face communication with my boyfriend, but I usually chat with my friends via social media.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 45.0제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ.
예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I am an introverted and friendly person. If we have disagreements, I usually prefer to stay quiet to avoid conflict.
문법
× Oh, almost in my free time, I can chatting with my friends, it helps me more relax and after the busy days and umm uh, I can uh, update, update information, related information through our through my friends.
✓ Oh, almost in my free time, I can chat with my friends, it helps me relax more after busy days and, umm, uh, I can, uh, update information, related information through my friends.
The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'can'. After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'helps me more relax' should be 'helps me relax more' to follow correct adverb placement.
× I always chat about with friends, especially in my free time. Umm, it helped me relax after a busy day and I can update, uh, the latest news from my friends. Update your life and.
✓ I always chat with friends, especially in my free time. Umm, it helps me relax after a busy day and I can update, uh, the latest news from my friends. Update your life and.
The phrase 'chat about with friends' is incorrect; 'chat with friends' is correct. Also, 'helped me relax' should be 'helps me relax' to maintain present tense consistency.
× I prefer to chat with one friends, uh, because uh, if I, umm, if, if I in a group, people, I, I, I'm difficult to follow the their story because I don't have more. I don't have much time to follow.
✓ I prefer to chat with one friend, uh, because, uh, if I, umm, if, if I am in a group of people, I find it difficult to follow their story because I don't have much time to follow.
The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' after 'one'. Also, 'I'm difficult' is incorrect; it should be 'I find it difficult' to express difficulty properly.
× It depends on who are the person I communicate with. Uh, for example, with my boyfriend, I, you know, I always want to face to face with him and uh, but in, in with my friend, I want to, uh, chat via social media than than.
✓ It depends on who the person I communicate with is. Uh, for example, with my boyfriend, I, you know, always want to be face to face with him, but with my friends, I prefer to chat via social media.
The sentence 'who are the person I communicate with' has incorrect word order; it should be 'who the person I communicate with is'. Also, 'face to face' needs the verb 'be' before it. The phrase 'than than' is redundant and should be removed.
× No, it's really seldom because I'm introvert person and I very friend, I am very friendly. So I if I have if I have a a work with my friend, I usually don't talk, don't talk anymore and.
✓ No, it's really rare because I'm an introverted person and I am very friendly. So if I have work with my friend, I usually don't argue anymore.
The phrase 'really seldom' is awkward; 'really rare' is better. 'Introvert person' should be 'an introverted person'. 'I very friend' is incorrect; it should be 'I am very friendly'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be simplified for clarity.
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