Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“like to chatting”应为“like chatting”。回答较长且有些重复，建议简洁表达并注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Sometimes I share pictures of beautiful sunsets or interesting scenery with them. We also talk about current trends and work-related topics.

제안: 回答中有发音和语法错误，如“continent”应为“content”，“rammer”应为“grammar”。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达。

예시: We usually chat about English because I am an English teacher. We discuss grammar, sentence structure, and listening skills to find better ways to help our students understand.

제안: 回答表达较好，但有些词汇使用不当，如“experience reassure our personal life”不清晰。建议用更准确的表达并避免口头语。

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows me to communicate with people from different backgrounds. This way, I can learn about their work and personal experiences.

제안: 回答中出现了不相关词汇“PayPal”，且表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免无关词汇，表达更自然。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me express my feelings better and understand others through real-time interaction.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“interruption”应为“misunderstanding”。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends because I think misunderstandings happen when we don't understand each other's opinions well. Clear and natural communication helps us connect better.

× Yeah, and I like to chatting with my friends.

✓ Yeah, and I like chatting with my friends.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'like to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'like chatting'.

× ...when I saw some very, very manification scenery, I also discussed with them.

✓ ...when I saw some very, very magnificent scenery, I also discussed it with them.

The word 'manification' is a misspelling of 'magnificent', which is the correct adjective to describe scenery. Also, 'discussed with them' requires an object; 'discussed it with them' is correct.

× Even we talk about what is trendy at the moment and even talk about work etcetera.

✓ We even talk about what is trendy at the moment and also talk about work, etcetera.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'Even we talk' should be 'We even talk'. Also, 'etcetera' should be preceded by a comma.

× Oh, the continent we most, most chat about is English subject because I'm working as a English teacher.

✓ Oh, the content we mostly chat about is the English subject because I'm working as an English teacher.

'Continent' is incorrect; the correct word is 'content'. 'Most, most' is redundant; 'mostly' is the correct adverb. 'English subject' needs the definite article 'the'. 'A English teacher' should be 'an English teacher' because 'English' starts with a vowel sound.

× So I try I we've discussed about the rammer, uh, the sentences structure and even the listening about English and to find out a better way to let the student understand and also will help us to prepare.

✓ So I try, and we've discussed the grammar, the sentence structure, and even listening in English to find a better way to help the students understand and also help us prepare.

'Discussed about' is incorrect; 'discussed' does not require 'about'. 'Rammer' is a misspelling of 'grammar'. 'Sentences structure' should be 'sentence structure'. 'Listening about English' should be 'listening in English'. 'Let the student understand' is better as 'help the students understand'.

× Well, if I had to choose, I would rather to UMM talk to in a group because in a group we can communicate with people from different walks of life and we can experience reassure our personal life with them and also to gain some insight from their working situation and personal UMM experience.

✓ Well, if I had to choose, I would rather talk in a group because in a group we can communicate with people from different walks of life, share our personal lives with them, and also gain some insight from their work situations and personal experiences.

'Would rather to talk' is incorrect; 'would rather' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. 'Talk to in a group' is awkward; 'talk in a group' is correct. 'Experience reassure our personal life' is incorrect; it should be 'share our personal lives'. 'Working situation' should be plural 'work situations'.

× Oh, I prefer to communicate with PayPal face to face because it allowed me to expose my my own feeling even more in reality and also I can receive the same umm information some in interaction from others.

✓ Oh, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to express my own feelings more realistically, and I can also receive the same information and interaction from others.

'Communicate with PayPal face to face' is incorrect and unclear; likely 'PayPal' is a mishearing or error. 'Allowed' should be 'allows' to match present tense. 'Expose my my own feeling' should be 'express my own feelings'. 'Some in interaction' is incorrect; 'information and interaction' is correct.

× No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe the interruption between us lies in had a better understand the other's opinions and how to express myself or others clearly and naturally, which means we can connect with each other even more.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe the understanding between us lies in having a better understanding of others' opinions and how to express myself or others clearly and naturally, which means we can connect with each other even more.

'Interruption' is incorrect; 'understanding' is correct. 'Lies in had a better understand' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'lies in having a better understanding'. 'The other's opinions' should be 'others' opinions' (plural possessive).