Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my college friends on WeChat and my colleagues during lunch breaks. We usually catch up on recent events, like trips we've taken or new restaurants we've tried.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but it can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Also, try to be more specific with your examples.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about recent life events. For instance, some have started new relationships or gotten engaged. Additionally, we share stories and souvenirs from recent trips to new destinations.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear phrases and filler words. Try to avoid fillers and unclear expressions. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly and provide a complete, coherent answer.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people. For example, I am part of a WeChat group with three college friends where we share recent updates, exciting news, and interesting things we find online.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes reasons, but some sentences are a bit unclear and contain minor grammar mistakes. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to see facial expressions and better understand each other. Therefore, I often organize reunions with my college friends to have coffee or spend weekends together and catch up.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Focus on using correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent.

예시: I don't argue with my friends because I believe nothing is worth damaging our friendship. When we have different opinions, we calmly exchange ideas and respect each other's views. I prefer to avoid arguments with close friends and family.

× Sometimes I chat with my college friends via WeChat or sometimes at work I just chat with my work friends During work lunch.

✓ Sometimes I chat with my college friends via WeChat, or sometimes at work, I just chat with my work friends during work lunch.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and capitalization, causing it to be a run-on sentence and confusing. Adding commas and correcting capitalization improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Where did we go recently for a trip or what did we, uh, which restaurant we tried that are pretty good?

✓ Where did we go recently for a trip, or which restaurant did we try that was pretty good?

The original sentence is fragmented and mixes question forms improperly. Reordering and simplifying the sentence into two clear questions improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Usually just catch up with changes or anything new happening in each other's life.

✓ Usually, we just catch up with changes or anything new happening in each other's lives.

The original sentence omits the subject 'we' and uses 'life' instead of the plural 'lives' to match 'each other.' Adding the subject and correcting the noun number improves grammatical accuracy.

× We like to share anything in that group, uh, recent changes, exciting news or anything interesting we found online.

✓ We like to share anything in that group, such as recent changes, exciting news, or anything interesting we find online.

The original sentence mixes past and present tense ('found' vs. 'like to share'). Changing 'found' to 'find' maintains tense consistency. Also, adding 'such as' clarifies the list.

× We always post in that group. Anybody can give up any.

✓ We always post in that group. Anybody can give up anything.

The phrase 'give up any' is incomplete and unclear. Changing it to 'give up anything' completes the thought, though contextually 'give up' may be incorrect; possibly 'give input' or 'give up' is misused, but per instructions only correcting grammar issues.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we can see each other's facial expression and get a clear understanding of what other people are expressing.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can see each other's facial expressions and get a clear understanding of what other people are expressing.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb. Also, 'facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match the plural subject 'each other.'

× So every after awhile I like to organize some reunion of my best college friends to say don't have a coffee or spend a weekend together so we can catch up with everybody.

✓ So every once in a while, I like to organize a reunion with my best college friends to have coffee or spend a weekend together so we can catch up with everybody.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect expressions ('every after awhile', 'some reunion', 'to say don't have a coffee'). Correcting these to standard expressions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Whenever we have different opinions, we just clearly were calmly exchange our ideas and then respect each other.

✓ Whenever we have different opinions, we just clearly and calmly exchange our ideas and then respect each other.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'were' which is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, adverbs 'clearly' and 'calmly' should be placed properly before the verb 'exchange.' Removing 'were' and adjusting adverb placement corrects the sentence.