Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

× I really enjoy chatting with friends and even on a day that I don't feel like it, it's bringing me joy and I can share a lot of stories and I just feel really comfortable around my friends.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with friends and even on a day that I don't feel like it, it brings me joy and I can share a lot of stories and I just feel really comfortable around my friends.

The phrase 'it's bringing me joy' incorrectly uses the present participle form 'bringing' instead of the simple present 'brings'. The simple present tense is appropriate here to express a general truth or habitual action. Suggestion: Use 'it brings me joy' to correctly express the idea.

× We also give each other tips to help us survive the school year and about loving. We're just share the advice.

✓ We also give each other tips to help us survive the school year and about loving. We just share the advice.

The phrase 'We're just share the advice' incorrectly combines the auxiliary verb 'are' with the base verb 'share'. The correct form is 'We just share the advice' without 'are'. Suggestion: Remove 'are' to correct the verb form.

× I think having a conversation with one people is more than enough.

✓ I think having a conversation with one person is more than enough.

The word 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'one'. The singular form 'person' should be used when referring to a single individual. Suggestion: Replace 'people' with 'person'.

× I just feel like I'm not fitting in a big amount of people.

✓ I just feel like I'm not fitting in with a big number of people.

The phrase 'fitting in a big amount of people' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in with' when talking about fitting in socially. Also, 'amount' is used for uncountable nouns; 'number' is correct for countable nouns like 'people'. Suggestion: Use 'fitting in with a big number of people'.

× I prefer communicating face to face because it would be more na natural and I just enjoy talking to them instead of calling because it shows more respect and that's all.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because it is more natural and I just enjoy talking to them instead of calling because it shows more respect and that's all.

The phrase 'would be more na natural' contains a typo and incorrect modal verb usage. 'Would be' suggests conditional mood, but here simple present 'is' is appropriate. Also, 'na' is a typo for 'natural'. Suggestion: Correct to 'it is more natural'.

× Of course, I think it's pretty normal in a friendship that sometimes we have a different mindset and everyone have their own opinion and we don't get along with each other sometimes.

✓ Of course, I think it's pretty normal in a friendship that sometimes we have different mindsets and everyone has their own opinion and we don't get along with each other sometimes.

The phrase 'everyone have' is incorrect because 'everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'a different mindset' should be plural 'different mindsets' to agree with 'sometimes we have'. Suggestion: Use 'different mindsets' and 'everyone has'.