Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they often give me useful advice when I face problems, which helps me handle difficult situations better.

제안: 回答中有很多语气词和重复，且句子不完整，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连词使句子连贯。

예시: I usually talk with my friends about problems I face at work, and I ask for their advice to find the best solutions.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子并明确表达偏好和原因。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I believe they can give me more focused and helpful advice.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达偏好并说明原因，避免语气词干扰。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends because it allows for better understanding and immediate feedback.

제안: 回答中有语气词和语法错误，建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并说明原因。

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends. When we have problems, we calmly discuss and give each other advice.

× Yes, I'm very happy to chatting with my friends because when I faced some problems, they will give me some advice to help me uh, solve the problems and to help me to a equal the uh situations.

✓ Yes, I'm very happy to chat with my friends because when I face some problems, they will give me some advice to help me, uh, solve the problems and to help me to equalize the, uh, situations.

动词不定式后面不应该用动名词形式，应该用动词原形。这里 'to chatting' 应改为 'to chat'。另外，时态应保持一致，描述习惯性动作用一般现在时 'face'。'a equal' 应改为动词 'equalize'，使表达更准确。

× Yes, I'm very happy to chatting with my friends because when I faced some problems, they will give me some advice to help me uh, solve the problems and to help me to a equal the uh situations.

✓ Yes, I'm very happy to chat with my friends because when I face some problems, they will give me some advice to help me, uh, solve the problems and to help me to equalize the, uh, situations.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，'faced' 是过去式，应改为 'face'。

× Uh, yeah, I often checked with my friends about umm, uh, uh, the problem when I faced in working and I will talk them how to, uh, talk them my situations and, uh, ask them, give, give me some advice about this problem and they often help me to find the best ways to solve the.

✓ Uh, yeah, I often check with my friends about, umm, uh, uh, the problems when I face them at work and I will tell them about my situations and, uh, ask them to give me some advice about this problem and they often help me to find the best ways to solve it.

'checked' 是过去式，描述习惯动作应用一般现在时 'check'。'faced in working' 结构不正确，应改为 'face them at work'。'talk them' 用法错误，应改为 'tell them'。句子末尾缺少宾语，应补充 'it'。

× Uh, yeah, I often checked with my friends about umm, uh, uh, the problem when I faced in working and I will talk them how to, uh, talk them my situations and, uh, ask them, give, give me some advice about this problem and they often help me to find the best ways to solve the.

✓ Uh, yeah, I often check with my friends about, umm, uh, uh, the problems when I face them at work and I will tell them about my situations and, uh, ask them to give me some advice about these problems and they often help me to find the best ways to solve them.

'problem' 应为复数 'problems'，因为指多个问题。'this problem' 应改为 'these problems'，'solve the' 应补充宾语 'them'。

× Yeah, in our daily life I prefer to chat with one only friend because I think in only. Hey she'll she will give me some advice.

✓ Yeah, in our daily life I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think she will give me some advice.

'one only friend' 词序错误，应为 'only one friend'。句子中 'in only. Hey she'll' 语义不清，应删去多余部分。

× Yeah, in our daily life I prefer to chat with one only friend because I think in only. Hey she'll she will give me some advice.

✓ Yeah, in our daily life I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think she will give me some advice.

代词使用错误，'she'll she will' 重复，应只用 'she will'。

× Yeah, yeah. In our daily life, I uh, prefer to chat with my friends face to face, uh, because uh, we're not faced her, uh, she will give me some advice and help me, uh.

✓ Yeah, yeah. In our daily life, I uh, prefer to chat with my friends face to face, uh, because uh, we're face to face, uh, she will give me some advice and help me, uh.

'we're not faced her' 结构错误，应改为 'we're face to face'，表示面对面交流。

× MMM, no waiting to argue with each other, uh, uh, when we're talking, uh, or we face some problems, they will give me some advice and we will stay calm to communicate with each other.

✓ MMM, no wanting to argue with each other, uh, uh, when we're talking, uh, or we face some problems, they will give me some advice and we will stay calm to communicate with each other.

'no waiting to argue' 用法错误，应为 'no wanting to argue'，表示不想争吵。