Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share our personal experiences. It always makes me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达不清晰，存在语法错误。建议明确说明聊天内容，使用连贯的句子，并避免重复。

예시: I usually talk with my friends about my family, work, and school life. Sharing these topics helps me relieve stress and feel more relaxed.

제안: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇使用不当。建议清晰表达偏好，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because the conversation lasts longer and we can share different experiences.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，清楚表达原因。

예시: I prefer communicating through social media because it feels more relaxed and natural. When I am sad, face-to-face conversations can feel too serious.

제안: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，避免重复和错误。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because everyone has different opinions, but it doesn't happen often.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend because umm we are, we have ourselves life.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because umm we are, we have our own lives.

这里“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，因为通常我们和多个朋友聊天；“ourselves life”应改为“our own lives”，表示我们的生活，且life需用复数形式。

× we have ourselves life

✓ we have our own lives

“ourselves”是反身代词，不能用作所有格，正确用法是“our own”表示“我们自己的”。

× when we stay with together we can tell about uh ourselves life.

✓ when we stay together we can talk about our own lives.

“stay with together”结构错误，应为“stay together”；“ourselves life”应为“our own lives”，life需复数。

× tell about uh ourselves life

✓ talk about our own lives

“tell about”用法不当，应该用“talk about”；“ourselves”错误用法，应为“our own”。

× But it, it make me very happy and relaxed.

✓ But it makes me very happy and relaxed.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。

× But it, it make me very happy and relaxed.

✓ But it makes me very happy and relaxed.

第三人称单数主语时，动词需加-s。

× I usually chat with my friends because I have many stress such as family, work, student, school or or left.

✓ I usually chat with my friends because I have much stress such as family, work, study, school or life.

“stress”是不可数名词，应使用“much”而非“many”；“student”应为“study”或“studying”；“left”应为“life”。

× I think chat with my friends is like me, very happy and relaxing.

✓ I think chatting with my friends makes me very happy and relaxed.

“chat”应用动名词形式“chatting”；“is like me”表达不清，应改为“makes me”；“relaxing”改为“relaxed”形容人的感受。

× It can make me put stress.

✓ It can help me relieve stress.

“put stress”表达错误，正确表达是“relieve stress”表示减轻压力。

× I prefer to chat with a good people because if, uh, just talk check with one people, uh, the topic will ending.

✓ I prefer to chat with good people because if I just talk with one person, the topic will end.

“a good people”错误，people是复数，不用冠词；“one people”应为“one person”；“will ending”应为“will end”。

× just talk check with one people

✓ just talk with one person

“talk check with”结构错误，应为“talk with”。

× the topic will ending

✓ the topic will end

“will”后应接动词原形，“ending”应改为“end”。

× we can talk by ourselves to uh, ourselves life.

✓ we can talk about our own lives.

“talk by ourselves to”表达错误，应为“talk about”；“ourselves life”应为“our own lives”。

× I prefer to communicate on social media because I think it relaxing and nature than face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I think it is more relaxing and natural than face to face.

“communicate on”应为“communicate via”；“it relaxing and nature”缺少动词，应为“it is more relaxing and natural”。

× it relaxing and nature

✓ it is more relaxing and natural

缺少系动词“is”，且“nature”应为形容词“natural”。

× If I if I'm sadness, face to face can make me inquiring and serious so social media.

✓ If I am sad, face to face communication can make me feel pressured and serious, so I prefer social media.

“I'm sadness”应为“I am sad”；“make me inquiring and serious”表达不当，应为“make me feel pressured and serious”；“so social media”不完整，应补充完整句子。

× Yes this is a normal thing but isn't often.

✓ Yes, this is a normal thing but it doesn't happen often.

“isn't often”表达不完整，应补充主语和谓语。

× I think everyone have themselves ideas

✓ I think everyone has their own ideas

“everyone”是单数，谓语用“has”；“themselves”用错，正确为“their own”。

× everyone have themselves ideas

✓ everyone has their own ideas

主语“everyone”是单数，谓语动词应为“has”。

× if if we agreement agree their ideas on we must argue with.

✓ if we agree with their ideas, we don't need to argue.

句子结构混乱，重复“if”，“agreement agree”错误，应简化为“if we agree with their ideas”；“must argue with”用法错误，应表达“不需要争论”。