Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share interesting stories and personal experiences. I also like hearing about their happy moments, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如时态和冠词使用不当。建议注意时态一致性，使用更准确的词汇，并避免口语化表达。

예시: We usually talk about the latest news and stories about people we know. For instance, yesterday we discussed someone who fell in love with a girl and even wrote a song for her, which I found very exciting.

제안: 表达较清晰，但有语法错误，如“feel ashamed”用词不当。建议使用更合适的词汇表达情感，并注意句子流畅。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert and feel nervous when talking to groups of unfamiliar people. Talking with close friends helps me relax.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“considerate”应为“consider”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子结构。

예시: I prefer communicating through social media because it offers various ways to express my feelings, like words, emojis, and pictures, making my messages more vivid. Also, it gives me enough time to think before replying.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“avoid argue”应为“avoid arguing”，句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

예시: I try to avoid arguing with my friends because I believe harmony is important in friendship. When we have different opinions, we discuss them calmly and try to reach an agreement.

× I would like to chat with my friends for some interesting stories, which includes the strike, the striking news and our own sufferings.

✓ I would like to chat with my friends about some interesting stories, which include the strike, the striking news and our own sufferings.

这里“includes”应改为“include”，因为主语是复数“stories”，动词需与主语一致。并且介词应为“about”而非“for”，表示谈论的内容。

× And I'm happy to hear about my friends to talk about his own hilarious happiness.

✓ And I'm happy to hear my friends talk about their own hilarious happiness.

“hear about my friends to talk”结构不正确，应改为“hear my friends talk”。另外，“his”应改为“their”，因为指代复数“friends”。

× For example, on the yesterday we had just talked about who had fell in love with that girl and wrote a song to her, and I think it's really exciting and interesting.

✓ For example, yesterday we just talked about who had fallen in love with that girl and wrote a song to her, and I think it's really exciting and interesting.

“on the yesterday”应改为“yesterday”，因为“yesterday”不需要冠词和介词。动词“had fell”应为过去完成时的过去分词“had fallen”。

× Therefore, chatting with my friends can make me feel unwind.

✓ Therefore, chatting with my friends can make me feel relaxed.

“feel unwind”不正确，应使用形容词“relaxed”来表达“放松”的感觉。

× I prefer to communicate via social media because it provides variety of ways to express my feelings such as words, emojis and pictures which made my expression more vivid.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it provides a variety of ways to express my feelings such as words, emojis and pictures which make my expression more vivid.

“provides variety of ways”应为“provides a variety of ways”，需要冠词“a”。“which made”应为“which make”，因为指代复数“ways”，且时态应与前文一致。

× Besides, it allows some enough time for me to considerate the question when I make a reply.

✓ Besides, it allows enough time for me to consider the question when I make a reply.

“some enough time”表达不正确，应为“enough time”。“considerate”是形容词，应改为动词“consider”。

× I will try my best to avoid argue with my friends because I think harmony is important in the friendship.

✓ I will try my best to avoid arguing with my friends because I think harmony is important in friendship.

“avoid”后应接动名词“arguing”，而非动词原形“argue”。“in the friendship”中“the”不必要，应为“in friendship”。

× If I hold different opinions with my friends, I will make a discussion with them and reach an agreement finally.

✓ If I have different opinions from my friends, I will have a discussion with them and finally reach an agreement.

“hold different opinions with”表达不正确，应为“have different opinions from”。“make a discussion”应为“have a discussion”。“finally”位置调整更自然。

× Therefore, the consequence that arguments bring in will never happens.

✓ Therefore, the consequences that arguments bring will never happen.

“consequence”应为复数“consequences”，与“arguments”对应。动词“happens”应为复数形式“happen”，与主语一致。