Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and avoid slight redundancy. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and vary your vocabulary a bit more.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated on their lives and maintain our friendships. I usually catch up with them two or three times a month to see how they are doing and what's new.

제안: Good range of topics and use of linking words. To improve, try to avoid informal words like 'literally' and provide a bit more specific examples to enrich your answer.

예시: With close friends, we discuss a wide range of topics such as career choices, new relationships, and upcoming trips. Moreover, we often share our feelings and emotions, which we might hesitate to express to others.

제안: Excellent answer with clear structure and appropriate linking words. To enhance it further, you could add a brief example to illustrate your point.

예시: It depends on the situation. For personal matters, I prefer chatting with one friend to have a deep and intimate conversation. However, when organising a party or planning a trip, I prefer a group chat because it generates many ideas, like when we planned our last holiday together.

제안: Your answer is good but contains minor errors and could be more concise. Use precise vocabulary and correct expressions to improve clarity.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to hear the tone and see facial expressions, which helps me understand the conversation better. However, if meeting in person isn't possible, I don't mind using social media.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases and some grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and clarify your points with correct grammar and vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when they cross my boundaries. Such situations are common, but I believe that being stubborn and refusing to apologise shows disrespect, which I cannot tolerate.

× Face to face conversation is the best form of communication because not only can you hear what they're saying, you can also say their facial expressions which could make you interpret the conversation in more depth.

✓ Face to face conversation is the best form of communication because not only can you hear what they're saying, you can also see their facial expressions which could make you interpret the conversation in more depth.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'see' because facial expressions are observed visually, not heard or spoken. Using 'see' correctly describes perceiving facial expressions.

× Crossing boundaries are quite common among friends.

✓ Crossing boundaries is quite common among friends.

The subject 'Crossing boundaries' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of plural 'are' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× However, being stubborn and fail to apologize just show umm, disrespect and I just cannot tolerate it.

✓ However, being stubborn and failing to apologize just shows, umm, disrespect and I just cannot tolerate it.

The phrase 'being stubborn and fail to apologize' mixes forms; both should be gerunds for parallelism: 'being stubborn and failing to apologize'. Also, the verb 'show' should be singular 'shows' to agree with the singular subject.