Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and filler words like 'Umm'. Try to avoid unnecessary fillers and be more concise. Also, 'once or twice per month at least' is a bit awkward; consider rephrasing for clarity. Aim to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to improve flow.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated on their lives and maintain our friendship. Usually, I talk to them at least once or twice a month to catch up on what's happening in their lives.

제안: Your answer covers relevant topics and uses linking words like 'additionally', which is good. However, some phrases are awkward, such as 'literally chat about everything they can be our life choices'. Try to use clearer expressions and more precise vocabulary. Also, provide slightly more specific examples to enrich your answer.

예시: With my close friends, we chat about various topics, including important life choices like career changes, new relationships, or upcoming trips. Additionally, we sometimes have deep conversations about our mental health.

제안: Your answer is well-structured and clear, with appropriate use of linking words like 'however'. To improve, correct minor grammatical errors such as 'go to one of my friend' to 'go to one of my friends'. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more naturally.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I want to have a deep and meaningful conversation, I prefer to talk to one of my friends and open up to them. However, when organising a party or trip, I prefer chatting with a group because there are more ideas to consider.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences, such as 'We are face to face' and 'I use social'. Try to use correct sentence structures and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'social' without specifying. Aim for clarity and coherence with linking words.

예시: Face-to-face communication is the best because you can hear what someone is saying and observe their facial expressions and body language, which helps you understand more. However, if meeting in person is not possible, social media is a good alternative. For example, I often use messaging apps to stay in touch with friends.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh'. The grammar is also incorrect in places, such as 'being stubborn' instead of 'are being stubborn'. Try to be more concise, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when they cross my boundaries or are being stubborn. In such cases, I feel it's important to have a serious conversation to resolve the issue.

× I usually talk with my friends once or twice per month at least so then I can know what's going on in their life.

✓ I usually talk with my friends once or twice per month at least so then I can know what's going on in their lives.

The word 'life' should be plural 'lives' because it refers to multiple friends, each having their own life. Using the plural form correctly matches the plural subject 'friends'.

× With my close friends, we literally chat about everything they can be our life choices such as career changes, new partner or the trip we are looking forward to.

✓ With my close friends, we literally chat about everything, such as our life choices like career changes, new partners, or trips we are looking forward to.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'they can be our life choices' which is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning by restructuring the sentence and using appropriate pronouns and plural forms to match the context.

× With my close friends, we literally chat about everything they can be our life choices such as career changes, new partner or the trip we are looking forward to.

✓ With my close friends, we literally chat about everything, such as our life choices like career changes, new partners, or trips we are looking forward to.

The nouns 'new partner' and 'the trip' should be plural 'new partners' and 'trips' to agree with the plural subject 'friends' and the general context of multiple possible events.

× If I want to have a deep and meaningful conversation, then I prefer to go to one of my friend and open up to them.

✓ If I want to have a deep and meaningful conversation, then I prefer to go to one of my friends and open up to them.

The phrase 'one of my friend' is incorrect because 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when used after 'one of my' to indicate one individual from a group.

× We are face to face is the best form of communication because not only can you hear what they are talking, but you also can observe their facial and body movements to decipher more information.

✓ Face-to-face communication is the best form because not only can you hear what they are saying, but you can also observe their facial and body movements to decipher more information.

The phrase 'We are face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'Face-to-face communication'. Also, 'what they are talking' is incorrect; it should be 'what they are saying'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× However, if it is not feasible, then social media is a great alternative way as well.

✓ However, if it is not feasible, then social media is a great alternative as well.

The phrase 'alternative way' is redundant when 'alternative' alone suffices. Removing 'way' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends, especially when they infringe my boundaries and being stubborn, I think it is no more than uh, sometimes people will infringe your boundaries, but some of my friends could be really stubborn, so I have to really have a conversation with them or argument with them.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends, especially when they infringe my boundaries and are being stubborn. I think it is normal; sometimes people will infringe your boundaries, but some of my friends can be really stubborn, so I have to have a conversation or argument with them.

The phrase 'and being stubborn' is incorrect; it should be 'and are being stubborn' to maintain parallel verb structure. Also, 'or argument with them' is incorrect; it should be 'or have an argument with them'. The correction improves verb form and sentence clarity.