Museum— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid grammatical errors and filler words like 'uh'. Use correct verb forms and make your sentences more concise and natural. For example, say 'they exhibit' instead of 'they exhibits'.

예시: Yes, I think museums are important because they exhibit items we don't see in daily life, such as oil paintings, modern art, and historical artifacts like architecture and pottery.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid confusing phrases like 'Utah or school type'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: In Bangkok, there are a few museums, mostly related to science and art. However, if you want to see historical museums, you might need to visit other places or educational institutions.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clear expressions. For example, explain why you want to visit museums despite not having time.

예시: I don't visit museums often because I am busy, but I would like to go more because I appreciate art and enjoy the atmosphere of museums.

제안: Be more specific and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, clarify the name of the college or describe the exhibition more clearly.

예시: I last visited a museum three years ago. It featured modern art created by students from a well-known art college.

× Yes, because they exhibits certain things that we don't encounter in everyday life, For example, uh, arts like oil paintings or even modern arts.

✓ Yes, because they exhibit certain things that we don't encounter in everyday life, for example, arts like oil paintings or even modern arts.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'exhibit' instead of 'exhibits' to agree in number. Also, 'For' should not be capitalized after a comma.

× In Bangkok there are few museums in here, most of them are regarding to science and art, but for history you have to go to Utah or school type for finding one.

✓ In Bangkok there are few museums here; most of them are related to science and art, but for history you have to go to Utah or a school-type place to find one.

The phrase 'in here' is redundant after 'In Bangkok'; 'regarding to' is incorrect, the correct phrase is 'related to'; 'school type' needs clarification and article 'a'; 'for finding one' should be 'to find one' to express purpose.

× No, but I would like to because I don't have much time but appreciate the art and and uh perceiving the scenery of the museum is 1. I want to try.

✓ No, but I would like to because I don't have much time, but I appreciate the art and perceiving the scenery of the museum is something I want to try.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Perceiving' should be connected properly; 'and and uh' is redundant; 'is 1' is unclear and likely a typo. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.