Museum— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, keep your sentences concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I believe museums are very important because they broaden our horizons and help us understand the connection between history and modern society.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles and plural forms, and try to link your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, my hometown is a cosmopolitan city with many museums. It is especially famous for its historic museum, which I often visit.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct singular/plural forms. Also, try to make your sentences more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I am a big fan of museums. Therefore, during my leisure time, I often travel to different cities to visit various museums because they help me understand the world better.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to speak confidently and provide a clear, concise response with specific details about the time and place.

예시: I visited the History Museum in Gansu province about a month ago. It was a fascinating experience.

× Yes, I absolutely believe that museums can blow broader ones horizons and you know, enhance everyone's ability to connect the history and the modern society.

✓ Yes, I absolutely believe that museums can broaden one's horizons and, you know, enhance everyone's ability to connect history and modern society.

The phrase 'blow broader ones horizons' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'broaden one's horizons' where 'broaden' is the verb meaning to expand, and 'one's' is the possessive pronoun. Also, 'the history and the modern society' should be 'history and modern society' without 'the' to refer to these concepts generally.

× Sure, my hometown is a custom cosmopolitan city which owns a great number of museums and especially it's famous for the historic museum, so I always visit different museum.

✓ Sure, my hometown is a custom cosmopolitan city which has a great number of museums and especially it's famous for the historic museum, so I always visit different museums.

The phrase 'visit different museum' is incorrect because 'museum' should be plural 'museums' to match 'different' which implies multiple. Also, 'owns' is less appropriate for cities; 'has' is better for possession in this context.

× Yes, I'm a huge fan of museum. So during my, uh, leisure time, I will uh, travel to different cities in order to visit all kinds of museums. Visiting museum always help me understand the world more.

✓ Yes, I'm a huge fan of museums. So during my, uh, leisure time, I will, uh, travel to different cities in order to visit all kinds of museums. Visiting museums always helps me understand the world more.

The phrase 'fan of museum' should be 'fan of museums' because 'museum' is countable and plural is needed here. Also, 'Visiting museum always help me' should be 'Visiting museums always helps me' to agree in number and verb form.

× Recently, I just, uh, visited, uh, his History Museum in Gansu province. Uh, to be precise, may be, uh, it may be. One month earlier, I visited the famous historical museum.

✓ Recently, I just, uh, visited the History Museum in Gansu province. Uh, to be precise, maybe, uh, it was about one month ago that I visited the famous historical museum.

The phrase 'his History Museum' is incorrect; it should be 'the History Museum'. Also, 'may be' should be 'maybe' as an adverb. 'One month earlier' is awkward; 'about one month ago' is more natural for past time reference.