Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I'm preparing for exams. I rely on the books and resources available there to help me study effectively.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about your activities and avoid redundancy.

예시: In the library, I usually conduct research by reading books and academic articles. This helps me prepare reports and study for my exams efficiently.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear direct answer, then provide specific supporting details. Also, avoid contradicting statements and clarify your points.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library often as a child. But I started using it more when I had to prepare for important exams.

제안: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains awkward phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly with specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: In my opinion, Chinese children often go to the library mainly to study and prepare for exams. They also use it to read scientific articles and improve their knowledge.

× I really often use the library and the sources of theirs, especially when I'm preparing for my exams.

✓ I really often use the library and their resources, especially when I'm preparing for my exams.

The phrase 'the sources of theirs' is an incorrect use of pronouns. The correct possessive pronoun here is 'their' to indicate that the resources belong to the library. Using 'their resources' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× During the process I'm really rely on the resources which are published in my library.

✓ During the process, I really rely on the resources which are available in my library.

The phrase 'I'm really rely' is incorrect because 'rely' should be used without 'am' in this context. Also, 'published in my library' is awkward; 'available in my library' is more appropriate. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'rely'.

× The first one is the using the the books for the research.

✓ The first one is using the books for research.

The phrase 'the using the the books' contains redundant articles 'the' and is awkward. 'Using the books' is sufficient. Also, 'for the research' should be 'for research' because 'research' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article.

× Actually, most usually I use the library for the research purposes in order to prepare some reports and academic records to introduce it to my teachers and prepare for the exams.

✓ Actually, I usually use the library for research purposes in order to prepare some reports and academic records to present to my teachers and prepare for the exams.

The phrase 'most usually' is incorrect; 'usually' alone is sufficient. Also, 'introduce it to my teachers' is awkward; 'present to my teachers' is more appropriate. 'Research purposes' does not need 'the' before it.

× However, when I supposed to prepare for my entral exams, I used to use the sources in the library.

✓ However, when I was supposed to prepare for my entrance exams, I used to use the sources in the library.

The phrase 'when I supposed to prepare' is missing the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past passive 'was supposed to'. Also, 'entral exams' is a typo and should be 'entrance exams'.

× Well, from my point of view, the children from China, they are supposed to use the libraries often due to several purposes.

✓ Well, from my point of view, children from China are supposed to use libraries often for several purposes.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'the children from China'. Also, 'the libraries' should be 'libraries' in general. 'Due to several purposes' is better expressed as 'for several purposes'.