Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about what educational activities you do.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate. For example, I usually do my homework and study various subjects there, which improves my learning efficiency.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer more fluent. Also, clarify your activities with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: In the library, I usually practice speaking and reading because these activities require a lot of focus. Additionally, I sometimes listen to motivational podcasts to stay inspired.

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs grammatical corrections and smoother sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I lived in a small village where there was no library available.

제안: Try to provide a more complete answer even if you are unsure. You can express your opinion or explain why you don't know, which shows your ability to handle unexpected questions.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, as I live in Mongolia, but I think many children in China might visit libraries to study and read.

× I spend most of my time in library because it helps me to do my homework and quiet place for me.

✓ I spend most of my time in the library because it helps me to do my homework and is a quiet place for me.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, the sentence lacks a verb linking 'quiet place' to the subject, so 'is' is needed to complete the sentence.

× I prefer quiet place because it helps me to concentrate more on my subjects and and other type of educational things.

✓ I prefer a quiet place because it helps me to concentrate more on my subjects and other types of educational things.

The phrase 'quiet place' needs the indefinite article 'a' as it is singular and nonspecific. The word 'and' is repeated twice, which is incorrect. Also, 'other type' should be pluralized to 'other types' to match the plural noun 'things'.

× Uh, I usually do, uh, I'll speaking and readings, uh, because it requires, umm, great amount of focus.

✓ Uh, I usually do, uh, speaking and reading, uh, because they require, umm, a great amount of focus.

The phrase 'I'll speaking and readings' is incorrect; 'I'll' (I will) should not be used here. Instead, use the gerund forms 'speaking' and 'reading'. Also, 'requires' should be 'require' to agree with the plural subject 'speaking and reading'. 'Great amount' needs the article 'a' before it.

× So, uh, quite place can help for this, uh, sometimes I heard a lot of motivational podcasts.

✓ So, uh, a quiet place can help with this, uh, sometimes I listen to a lot of motivational podcasts.

The phrase 'help for this' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'help with this'. 'Quite place' should be 'a quiet place' with the article and correct spelling. Also, 'I heard' in this context is better as 'I listen to' to indicate habitual action.

× No, when I was a kid I lived in small village, there was no library, so I've never used to go library in my younger age.

✓ No, when I was a kid I lived in a small village; there was no library, so I never used to go to the library in my younger age.

The phrase 'lived in small village' needs the article 'a' before 'small village'. 'Used to go library' is incorrect; it should be 'used to go to the library' with the preposition 'to' and the article 'the'. Also, 'I've never' is better as 'I never' for past habitual action.