Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est trop courte et contient une répétition inutile. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase claire et ajoutez une raison pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle et complète.

예시: No, I rarely go to the library because I usually prefer reading books online or at home.

제안: Votre réponse manque de fluidité et de structure. Utilisez une phrase complète pour répondre directement, puis ajoutez des détails avec des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.

예시: In the library, I usually choose a book and read it, especially historical books because I find them very interesting.

제안: Votre réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de clarté. Utilisez le passé correctement et structurez votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie d'un détail.

예시: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid. I used to go there with my dad to read storybooks.

제안: Votre réponse est confuse et difficile à comprendre. Essayez de formuler une réponse claire et structurée, en évitant les hésitations et en utilisant un vocabulaire approprié.

예시: Yes, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading and learning new things.

× No, I rarely go to the library library.

✓ No, I rarely go to the library.

The repetition of the word 'library' is unnecessary and incorrect. It should be mentioned only once to maintain proper singular noun usage and sentence clarity.

× Choose a book and read it. I prefer. Historic Books.

✓ I choose a book and read it. I prefer historic books.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper subject and verb agreement. 'Choose a book and read it' is a fragment; it should be 'I choose a book and read it.' Also, 'I prefer. Historic Books.' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer historic books.' to form a complete sentence.

× Yes I do when I was a kid. I was go to the library with my dad.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a kid. I used to go to the library with my dad.

The phrase 'Yes I do when I was a kid' mixes present and past tense incorrectly; it should be 'Yes, I did when I was a kid.' Also, 'I was go' is incorrect; the correct past habitual expression is 'I used to go.' This properly indicates past repeated actions.

× I think that uh, so yes, I think the shyness hits often go to the library because they knowing about or by their love for the library.

✓ I think that, yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they know about it or because of their love for the library.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and incorrect verb forms. 'The shyness hits' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement; it should be 'Chinese kids.' 'They knowing' is incorrect; it should be 'they know.' Also, 'because of their love' is the correct prepositional phrase.