Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too long and a bit unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add a reason or example. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use simple and clear language to express your ideas naturally.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home. However, I know libraries are quiet and good for concentration, so sometimes I visit when I need a peaceful place.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'you know' and repeating 'jot down'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and check grammar for plural forms.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually take notes to review later because the quiet and peaceful environment helps me concentrate better.

제안: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use past tense correctly and avoid confusing expressions. Give a clear reason and keep sentences concise and natural.

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred staying in my room. I was not very interested in reading at the library even though it is a quiet place for studying.

제안: Your answer is honest but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not answer the question directly.

예시: I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I think students everywhere should visit the library because it helps with studying in a quiet environment.

× But in as much as libraries are a really good place to relax and have a very nice study time, I really have this bad habit of not going to the library but still preparing for my exams or whatever and passing very well because I am not just someone that likes going to the library.

✓ Although libraries are a really good place to relax and have a very nice study time, I really have this bad habit of not going to the library but still preparing for my exams or whatever and passing very well because I am not just someone who likes going to the library.

The phrase 'But in as much as' is an incorrect conjunction usage. The correct conjunction to express contrast here is 'Although'. Also, 'someone that' should be 'someone who' when referring to people.

× I am not just someone that likes going to the library.

✓ I am not just someone who likes going to the library.

When referring to people, the relative pronoun 'who' should be used instead of 'that' for correctness and formality.

× I would rather make my.

✓ I would rather study on my own.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear object or verb phrase. Completing the sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× And it just gives me this quiet, serene nature that I love, you know, to keep me focused and jot down this important notes.

✓ And it just gives me this quiet, serene nature that I love, you know, to keep me focused and jot down these important notes.

The quantifier 'this' is singular and should be used with singular nouns. Since 'notes' is plural, the correct quantifier is 'these'.

× No, I do not go to the library when I was a kid, because I have always been stay in your room and really kind of person.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid, because I have always stayed in my room and am really that kind of person.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Do not go' should be 'did not go' to match past time 'when I was a kid'. 'Have always been stay' is incorrect; it should be 'have always stayed'. Also, 'your room' should be 'my room' to maintain correct pronoun reference.

× I have always been stay in your room and really kind of person.

✓ I have always stayed in my room and am really that kind of person.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's own room. Also, the verb phrase needed correction as explained earlier.

× I do not fancy reading in the library so much, even if the library is built for quality time studying in a very quiet and serene atmosphere.

✓ I do not fancy reading at the library so much, even if the library is built for quality time studying in a very quiet and serene atmosphere.

The preposition 'in' is less common with 'library' in this context; 'at the library' is more natural when referring to the location where one reads or studies.

× I really have no idea, I am a Nigerian citizen and I haven't been to China before, neither do I watch them on TV.

✓ I really have no idea, I am a Nigerian citizen and I haven't been to China before, nor do I watch programs about them on TV.

The pronoun 'them' is unclear and incorrectly used. It should be replaced with a clearer noun phrase like 'programs about them' to specify what is watched on TV. Also, 'neither' is better replaced with 'nor' in this negative context.