Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "I used to go library" yerine "I used to go to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "that's why I I don't have a chance" ifadesinde tekrar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library often during my college years. However, now that I am a lawyer, I don't have much time to visit it. Still, I love reading books whenever I get the chance.

제안: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. "final final exams" yerine "final exams" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "a self improvement books" ifadesi yanlış, "self-improvement books" olmalı. Bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirebilirsiniz.

예시: I usually read books to prepare for my final exams. Recently, I have started reading self-improvement books, which have helped me improve my mental health.

제안: Cümleniz anlam açısından karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I aware of" yerine "I was aware of" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "The ceiling is affected me" ifadesi yanlış, "The ceiling affected me" daha doğru olur. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve anlaşılır kurmaya çalışın.

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was 12 years old. The first things I noticed were the bookshelves and the ceiling. The ceiling impressed me and showed how good the place was.

제안: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "I do not know of Chinese kids often go to library" yerine "I do not know if Chinese kids often go to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "should been in the library" ifadesi yanlış, "should be in the library" olmalı. Daha doğal ifadeler kullanmaya özen gösterin.

예시: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I am Turkish. However, I believe all children should spend time in libraries and be inspired by books.

× Yes, but I used to go library in my college years.

✓ Yes, but I used to go to the library in my college years.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'to' before 'library' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', we use 'to the library'.

× Right now I'm a lawyer and that's why I I don't have a chance to go to the library.

✓ Right now I'm a lawyer and that's why I don't have a chance to go to the library.

There is a repeated word 'I'. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and correctness.

× But I always love to read books.

✓ But I always love reading books.

The verb 'love' is usually followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences or habits.

× I mostly read books and try to pass my final final exams but recently I try to read new things like a self improvement books.

✓ I mostly read books and tried to pass my final exams but recently I have been trying to read new things like self-improvement books.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match 'mostly read' and 'final exams'. Also, 'recently' suggests present perfect continuous 'have been trying'. 'Final final exams' is repetitive and 'a self improvement books' is incorrect article and plural usage.

× like a self improvement books.

✓ like self-improvement books.

'Books' is plural, so 'a' (singular article) is incorrect. Also, 'self improvement' should be hyphenated as 'self-improvement' when used as a compound adjective.

× And that's helped me to improve my mental health.

✓ And that's helped me improve my mental health.

The phrase 'helped me to improve' is correct but 'helped me improve' is more natural and concise in English.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was 12 years old.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was 12 years old.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× First thing I aware of the bookshelves and the ceiling.

✓ The first thing I noticed was the bookshelves and the ceiling.

The original sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. 'Aware of' is not used correctly here; 'noticed' fits better to express perception.

× The ceiling is affected me how good the place is place are sorry.

✓ The ceiling showed me how good the place was.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Is affected me' is incorrect; 'showed me' conveys the intended meaning. Also, 'place are sorry' is unclear and removed.

× I do not know of Chinese kids often go to library because I'm Turkish,

✓ I do not know if Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm Turkish,

The phrase 'know of' is incorrect here; 'know if' is appropriate for indirect questions. Also, 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I do not know of Chinese kids often go to library because I'm Turkish, but to my idea all the kids should been in the library and impressed by the books.

✓ I do not know if Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm Turkish, but in my opinion all kids should be in the library and impressed by the books.

'To my idea' is incorrect; 'in my opinion' is the correct phrase. 'Should been' is incorrect; it should be 'should be'. Also, 'all the kids' can be 'all kids' for generalization.