Library— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often go to the library?
수험생
No, actually I live in a very small town so we don't have any libraries, but I usually go online and search for some ebooks websites so that I can read books, especially novel fiction.
시험관
What do you usually do in the library?
수험생
As I said before, I don't go to the library because we don't have any, but I usually surfing online to read novels and especially comics. I I did that. I do that every day and except for reading, I did nothing else.
시험관
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
수험생
Unfortunately, no, we don't have any libraries and the bookstores were very small and they just have textbooks for school. And so I don't didn't go there often. I just went there to the bookstore to buy my school supplies.
시험관
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
수험생
I'm not Chinese and I have never been to China, so I don't know much about them. But in my concern, the people, Chinese people, to them studying is very important. So I think that the parents, they want their children to go to the library as much as possible.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tăng tính hiệu quả. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn về loại sách bạn thích đọc để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
예시: No, I don't often go to the library because my town is very small and has none. Instead, I usually read novels online through various ebook websites, which I find very convenient.
What do you usually do in the library?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như sử dụng đúng thì và cấu trúc câu. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động của bạn khi đọc sách trực tuyến.
예시: Since there is no library nearby, I usually read novels and comics online every day. Besides reading, I don't usually do other activities related to books.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như 'don't didn't'. Câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm thời thơ ấu của bạn liên quan đến việc đọc sách hoặc thư viện.
예시: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there were none in my town. The bookstores were small and mainly sold school textbooks, so I only visited them to buy supplies.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự tin và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.
예시: Although I am not Chinese and have never been to China, I believe that studying is very important in their culture. Therefore, many parents probably encourage their children to visit libraries frequently.
문법
× I usually go online and search for some ebooks websites so that I can read books, especially novel fiction.
✓ I usually go online and search for some ebook websites so that I can read books, especially novel fiction.
The preposition 'for' is correctly used here, but the phrase 'ebooks websites' is incorrect. It should be 'ebook websites' because 'ebook' acts as an adjective describing the websites. The plural form 'ebooks' is not appropriate here.
× I usually surfing online to read novels and especially comics.
✓ I usually surf online to read novels and especially comics.
After the adverb 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Surfing' is incorrect here; it should be 'surf'. This is a common error with verb forms after adverbs of frequency.
× I I did that. I do that every day and except for reading, I did nothing else.
✓ I do that every day, and except for reading, I do nothing else.
The sentence mixes past tense 'did' with present tense 'do that every day'. Since the action is habitual, present tense should be used consistently. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typo and should be removed.
× I don't didn't go there often.
✓ I didn't go there often.
The phrase 'don't didn't' is incorrect because it combines present and past tense negatives. Only the past tense negative 'didn't' should be used here.
× I just went there to the bookstore to buy my school supplies.
✓ I just went to the bookstore to buy my school supplies.
The phrase 'went there to the bookstore' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place, so 'went to the bookstore' is correct.
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