Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage like 'metros' instead of 'materials'.

예시: I do not often go to the library nowadays. However, when I was in college, I visited it almost every day because it was the best place to find the study materials I needed for my courses.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use present tense if you are talking about usual activities, and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'more context to my room'. Be specific about your activities in the library.

예시: Usually, I go to the library to find resources for my research or articles. I take notes there and gather references to support my work effectively.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammatical errors and be more concise.

예시: Yes, I visited the library when I was in school. I especially enjoyed reading comics and storybooks, which were my favourite sections.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct opinion supported by reasons or examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is coherent and relevant.

예시: Although I don't have exact statistics, I believe many Chinese children visit libraries regularly because schools and communities encourage reading and provide good facilities.

× Library is a place that I least frequently visited.

✓ The library is a place that I least frequently visited.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× Yes, but during those days I have visited the library almost every day because it is a place where I can find the metros that I needed and the only places where I could find my resources.

✓ Yes, but during those days I visited the library almost every day because it was a place where I could find the materials that I needed and the only place where I could find my resources.

The sentence refers to a past time ('during those days'), so the present perfect 'have visited' should be changed to simple past 'visited'. Also, 'metros' seems to be a typo for 'materials'. The verb 'is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Places' should be singular 'place' to match the context.

× I go to the library to look for more resources when I was writing an article or when I was working on a test in my research during the college.

✓ I went to the library to look for more resources when I was writing an article or working on a test for my research during college.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I go' with past tense 'was writing'. To maintain tense consistency, 'I go' should be 'I went'. Also, 'in my research during the college' is awkward; 'for my research during college' is more appropriate.

× So I go there to take notes.

✓ So I went there to take notes.

The context is past tense, so 'go' should be 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× I go there to increase my references and to have more context to my room.

✓ I went there to increase my references and to have more context for my work.

Again, tense consistency requires 'went' instead of 'go'. Also, 'context to my room' is unclear; likely intended 'context for my work' or 'context for my research'.

× Yes, as a kid I visited the library when I was in the school.

✓ Yes, as a kid I visited the library when I was in school.

The phrase 'in the school' is incorrect here; 'in school' is the correct expression when referring to attending school generally.

× So the main reason why I would go to the library was to read some of the sections like the the comics.

✓ So the main reason why I would go to the library was to read some of the sections like the comics.

There is a repeated article 'the the' which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'the' corrects the sentence.

× I'm sure their kids and kids like libraries.

✓ I'm sure their kids and other kids like libraries.

The phrase 'their kids and kids' is repetitive and unclear. Adding 'other' clarifies the meaning that both their kids and other children like libraries.