Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affect the naturalness and effectiveness of your response. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

예시: I usually go to the library to read books and find resources related to my studies. Additionally, I do my assignments there because the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.

× I usually cheer in the library to read those and find some resources about those effects and also to do my assignments.

✓ I usually go to the library to read and find some resources about those effects and also to do my assignments.

The verb 'cheer' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb should be 'go' to indicate the action of visiting the library. Using 'cheer' is a verb + -ing form error because it does not fit the intended meaning or context.

× And it's very useful that I will consider trade writing and doing my assignments in the library because it's.

✓ And it's very useful, so I consider writing and doing my assignments in the library.

The original sentence is incomplete and has structural issues. 'Trade writing' is unclear and likely a mistake. The sentence should be restructured for clarity and completeness, removing 'trade' and properly connecting ideas.