Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "I try to visited" should be "I try to visit." Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your reasons naturally.

예시: I don't visit the library often, but I go there when I need to borrow books or find a quiet place to read. Because of this, I usually try to visit on weekends or public holidays.

제안: Your answer is a bit long and lacks clear linking words, making it hard to follow. Try to break your answer into shorter sentences and use connectors like "and" or "also" properly. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, for example, "library provide" should be "library provides."

예시: I usually read various books in the library. Also, when I need to do assignments or focus on my studies, I visit because it offers a peaceful environment. Additionally, the library provides free printing services.

제안: Your answer is informative but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it more coherent. For example, "it was a compulsory" should be "it was compulsory." Also, use "once a week" instead of "once in a week."

예시: We didn't have a public library like today. However, during my school days, we had a common library at school, and it was compulsory for us to visit it once a week. Our visits were recorded to ensure attendance.

제안: Your answer is brief and contains grammatical errors. For example, "go to library" should be "go to the library," and "a very good reading habits" should be "very good reading habits." Also, avoid vague phrases like "it's a very good." Try to provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. I believe they develop strong reading habits from a young age because their education encourages regular reading, which helps improve their knowledge and skills.

× I do not visit library often, but if I have to borrow any books or if I want a peaceful place where I can read, I definitely go there.

✓ I do not visit the library often, but if I have to borrow any books or if I want a peaceful place where I can read, I definitely go there.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I try to visited during my weekends or if I have any public holidays.

✓ I try to visit during my weekends or if I have any public holidays.

The verb 'try' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'visit' (infinitive without 'to' after 'try to'). Using 'visited' (past tense) after 'try to' is incorrect. The correct form is 'try to visit'.

× I love to read different books provided there and also whenever I have to do my assignment or concentrate on my studies and I need a peaceful place then I visit library also as library provide us free printing service.

✓ I love to read different books provided there and also whenever I have to do my assignment or concentrate on my studies and I need a peaceful place then I visit the library also as the library provides us free printing service.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'library provide' should be 'library provides' to agree with the singular subject.

× I love to read different books provided there and also whenever I have to do my assignment or concentrate on my studies and I need a peaceful place then I visit library also as library provide us free printing service.

✓ I love to read different books provided there and also whenever I have to do my assignment or concentrate on my studies and I need a peaceful place then I visit the library also as the library provides us free printing service.

The verb 'provide' must agree with the singular subject 'library'. Therefore, it should be 'provides' in the third person singular form.

× We did not have Public Library like we have nowadays.

✓ We did not have a public library like we have nowadays.

When referring to a general public library, the indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'public library'. Also, 'Public Library' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun.

× During my school days, we used to have a common library in the school and it was a compulsory for us to visit it once in a week and it used to be recorded.

✓ During my school days, we used to have a common library in the school and it was compulsory for us to visit it once a week and it used to be recorded.

The phrase 'a compulsory' is incorrect because 'compulsory' is an adjective and does not need an article. Also, 'once in a week' should be 'once a week' for correct idiomatic expression.

× Yes, Chinese kids go to library very often.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids go to the library very often.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I believe they have a very good reading habits since their childhood and it's a very good.

✓ I believe they have very good reading habits since their childhood and it's very good.

The phrase 'a very good reading habits' is incorrect because 'habits' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'it's a very good' is incomplete and should be 'it's very good' to be grammatically correct.