Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons or examples using linking words.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me improve my vocabulary and knowledge. For instance, I enjoy reading different types of books that are not easily available at home. Moreover, the quiet environment allows me to concentrate better.

제안: Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about your own activities in the library rather than general statements.

예시: Usually, I go to the library to read books and relax. I find the calm environment perfect for focusing on my studies and enjoying some quiet time. Additionally, I sometimes use the library's resources to research topics of interest.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library often when I was a kid. I looked forward to it because it gave me a chance to leave the classroom and explore new books. For example, I enjoyed reading adventure stories that sparked my imagination.

제안: Try to answer the question more directly and avoid unnecessary details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure.

예시: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I did not see many Chinese students at my school. However, I believe that reading is important for everyone, regardless of nationality.

× When I was in school, I really like to go to library and it's one of my favorite activity because there are certain types of book which I can read and improve my, improve my vocabulary, improve my knowledge.

✓ When I was in school, I really liked to go to the library and it was one of my favorite activities because there were certain types of books which I could read to improve my vocabulary and knowledge.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was in school'), so the verbs should be in the past tense ('liked' instead of 'like'). Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to agree with 'one of my favorite'. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to match 'certain types'. 'Can' changes to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency. The phrase 'improve my, improve my vocabulary, improve my knowledge' is redundant; it is better to say 'improve my vocabulary and knowledge'. This correction ensures proper tense usage and agreement.

× When I was in school, I really like to go to library and it's one of my favorite activity because there are certain types of book which I can read and improve my, improve my vocabulary, improve my knowledge.

✓ When I was in school, I really liked to go to the library and it was one of my favorite activities because there were certain types of books which I could read to improve my vocabulary and knowledge.

The noun 'library' is a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Similarly, 'activity' should be plural 'activities' because it is preceded by 'one of my favorite', which implies multiple activities. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to agree with 'certain types'. Using the correct articles and plural forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I do like a visiting library.

✓ So I do like visiting the library.

The phrase 'a visiting library' is incorrect because 'visiting' is a verb here, not a noun, and 'library' is a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the'. The correct form is 'visiting the library'.

× It's one of my favorite activity when I'm in when I'm in home, I like reading book as well.

✓ It's one of my favorite activities. When I'm at home, I like reading books as well.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' after 'one of my favorite'. The phrase 'when I'm in home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for locations like home. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to indicate reading multiple books. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× From my perspective, the library is a place where people go to relax, read books and that's the I think our major reason why people go to library to read books and calm their minds and enjoy the enjoy the environment.

✓ From my perspective, the library is a place where people go to relax and read books, and I think the major reason why people go to the library is to read books, calm their minds, and enjoy the environment.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding conjunctions and correcting redundancy. 'Enjoy the enjoy the environment' is repetitive and corrected to 'enjoy the environment'.

× To be honest, it was one of my favorite activity when I was in school.

✓ To be honest, it was one of my favorite activities when I was in school.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' after 'one of my favorite' to indicate one among many activities. The rest of the sentence is correctly in past tense.

× I was always waiting for the the library because it was, it was something which gives us which gives us opportunity to go outside from the classroom and to, to experience something different.

✓ I was always waiting for the library because it was something that gave us the opportunity to go outside the classroom and experience something different.

The repeated 'the the' is a typo; only one 'the' is needed before 'library'. 'Gives us' should be in past tense 'gave us' to match the past context. 'Which gives us opportunity' should be 'that gave us the opportunity' for clarity and correctness. 'Go outside from the classroom' is better as 'go outside the classroom'.

× And there were some books which I really wanted to read.

✓ And there were some books which I really wanted to read.

This sentence is correct in terms of singular and plural usage; no correction needed.

× From my experience when I was in school, unfortunately there were no any Chinese student.

✓ From my experience when I was in school, unfortunately there were no Chinese students.

'No any' is incorrect; 'no' alone suffices. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'no' indicating zero quantity of multiple individuals.

× There were Indian student and Tibetan student and and the library was quite popular among the Tibetan students and the Indian students.

✓ There were Indian students and Tibetan students, and the library was quite popular among the Tibetan students and the Indian students.

'Student' should be plural 'students' when referring to multiple individuals. The sentence also benefits from adding commas and correcting repeated 'and' for clarity.