Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by reducing filler words like 'uh' and 'actually'. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repetition, for example, avoid saying 'at my home' twice. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. Therefore, I prefer buying books online and studying at home, which makes me feel more comfortable.

제안: Your answer needs to be more complete and coherent. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'So I spend my time in library very.' Use linking words such as 'first', 'then', and 'after that' to make your answer flow better. Also, try to be more specific about why you prefer self-improvement books.

예시: I usually prefer reading self-improvement books rather than fiction because they help me develop new skills. First, I find a quiet spot in the library and read for an hour. Then, I take a 10-minute break before reading for another hour.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'I didn't even know that libraries existed' instead of 'library exists'. Also, avoid filler words like 'actually' and try to combine sentences for better flow.

예시: No, I never went to a library when I was a kid because I didn't even know that libraries existed. Instead, I used to spend all my time playing with other children.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs better sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid run-on sentences by using linking words like 'because' and 'compared to'. Also, use more precise words like 'children' instead of 'kids' and 'materials' instead of 'stuff'.

예시: I think most Chinese children often go to the library because they are passionate about reading and learning new things. Compared to children from other countries, they seem more interested in reading materials.

× there is no library near my house

✓ there is no library near my house

The sentence is correct as it uses 'there is' appropriately for a singular noun 'library'. No correction needed.

× I prefer uh buying books on online and study at home

✓ I prefer buying books online and studying at home

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used before 'online'. The correct form is 'buying books online'. Also, parallel structure requires 'studying' to match 'buying'.

× This makes me uh comfortable while reading at my home

✓ This makes me comfortable while reading at home

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary before 'my home'. The correct phrase is 'reading at home' without 'my'.

× so I prefer doing it in my home

✓ so I prefer doing it at home

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at home' is the correct expression.

× I usually prefer reading self improvement books rather than fictional books

✓ I usually prefer reading self-improvement books rather than fiction books

The phrase 'self improvement' should be hyphenated as 'self-improvement'. Also, 'fictional books' is better expressed as 'fiction books'.

× I sit in a very calm and quiet place in the library and read for an hour and then take 10 minutes break

✓ I sit in a very calm and quiet place in the library and read for an hour and then take a 10-minute break

The phrase '10 minutes break' needs an article 'a' and '10 minutes' should be singular and hyphenated as '10-minute' when used as an adjective.

× So I spend my time in library very

✓ So I spend my time in the library very well

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an adverb to complete the meaning. Adding 'well' and the article 'the' before 'library' corrects the sentence.

× No, I actually never went to a library when I was a kid

✓ No, I actually never went to the library when I was a kid

When referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener, 'the library' is correct instead of 'a library'.

× I back then I didn't even know that library exists

✓ Back then, I didn't even know that the library existed

The phrase 'I back then' is incorrect; it should be 'Back then'. Also, 'library exists' should be in past tense 'library existed' and include the article 'the'.

× I used to spend all my time on playing with other kids

✓ I used to spend all my time playing with other kids

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'playing'. The correct form is 'spend time playing'.

× I think most of the Chinese kids go to the library

✓ I think most Chinese kids go to the library

The phrase 'most of the Chinese kids' is less natural; 'most Chinese kids' is preferred. Also, 'kids' is plural and correctly used.

× they seem so passionate about reading books and learning new things comparatively to other country kids

✓ they seem so passionate about reading books and learning new things compared to kids from other countries

The phrase 'comparatively to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'compared to'. Also, 'other country kids' should be 'kids from other countries'.