Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use clear and concise sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement. For example, say "Libraries have digital resources" instead of "Libraries has a digital re resources." Also, avoid repeating phrases like "it has a quiet atmosphere" twice.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to read books recommended by my friends and to do research for my school. The quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate better. Additionally, I like using the digital resources available there.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more coherent and engaging. For example, use "Firstly" or "In addition" to connect ideas.

예시: In the library, I usually read books recommended by my friends. In addition, I do my homework and sometimes use the digital resources they provide.

제안: Good answer with clear structure and supporting details. To improve, you could use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, such as "because" or "so."

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I used to spend my time playing with my cousins or traveling with my parents. I thought libraries were boring places.

제안: Very good answer with relevant details and examples. To enhance it further, you could add linking words like "for instance" or "moreover" to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids frequently visit libraries, especially those living in urban areas. For instance, libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer many books to support their schoolwork.

× Libraries has a digital re resources that I like to use.

✓ Libraries have digital resources that I like to use.

The subject 'Libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number. Also, 're resources' seems to be a typo and should be 'resources'. Suggestion: Use 'have' with plural subjects to maintain subject-verb agreement.