Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains a mistake by mentioning 'laboratory' instead of 'library'. To improve, directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and ensure correct word usage. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I am studying BSc Computer Science and need a quiet place to focus on my studies.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and avoid repeating 'library' too often. Also, try to be more specific about what you do in the library.

예시: I usually go to the library to study difficult concepts because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Moreover, I can access many books on various subjects to deepen my understanding.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and pronoun confusion ('She' instead of 'He'). To improve, use correct pronouns, avoid redundancy, and structure your answer with clear linking words.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child. My grandfather loved reading books and newspapers, and he often took me along. This helped me develop a habit of reading, which made learning easier during my school years.

제안: Your answer is somewhat general and could be more focused on the question. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases like 'great things'.

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries from a young age because their parents encourage them to learn. This habit contributes to the country's many innovations and achievements.

× Yes, I visit a library frequently because I'm currently studying BSc Computer science so I have a lot of things to learn.

✓ Yes, I visit the library frequently because I'm currently studying BSc Computer Science so I have a lot of things to learn.

In this context, 'the library' refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener, so the definite article 'the' should be used instead of 'a'. Also, 'Computer science' should be capitalized as 'Computer Science' as it is a proper noun.

× So I always go to laboratory to learn new kind of things.

✓ So I always go to the laboratory to learn new kinds of things.

The noun 'laboratory' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'new kind of things' should be pluralized to 'new kinds of things' to be grammatically correct.

× I mostly go to library to learn and understand difficult concepts because in library there is a quiet environment which helps me to remember things for a long period of time.

✓ I mostly go to the library to learn and understand difficult concepts because in the library there is a quiet environment which helps me to remember things for a long period of time.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. It should be used consistently in the sentence.

× Apart from that there are a lot of books available on different topics which I can learn.

✓ Apart from that, there are a lot of books available on different topics which I can learn from.

A comma is needed after 'Apart from that' for correct sentence structure. Also, the phrase 'which I can learn' is incomplete; it should be 'which I can learn from' to indicate the source of learning.

× Yes, I always went to a library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I always went to the library when I was a kid.

When referring to a specific library known in context, the definite article 'the' is appropriate instead of 'a'.

× My grandfather was very fond of reading books and newspaper. She always took me to library with him and this helped me to make a habit of reading books, which helped me to remember things clearly.

✓ My grandfather was very fond of reading books and newspapers. He always took me to the library with him and this helped me to develop a habit of reading books, which helped me to remember things clearly.

The pronoun 'She' is incorrect for 'grandfather' and should be 'He'. 'Newspaper' should be pluralized to 'newspapers' to match the context. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Make a habit' is better expressed as 'develop a habit'.

× In my school life, it was very easy for me to read things because as a kid I went to a library.

✓ In my school life, it was very easy for me to read things because as a kid I went to the library.

The definite article 'the' should be used before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× Yes, kids of China are very fond of learning great things and new things due to which there are many innovations and creations in China that influence the whole world.

✓ Yes, kids in China are very fond of learning great things and new things, due to which there are many innovations and creations in China that influence the whole world.

The phrase 'kids of China' is better expressed as 'kids in China'. A comma is needed after 'new things' to separate clauses properly.

× Many children in China go to library in their early age by their parents so they can learn new things.

✓ Many children in China go to the library at an early age with their parents so they can learn new things.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'in their early age' should be 'at an early age'. Also, 'by their parents' is incorrect here; 'with their parents' is appropriate to indicate accompaniment.