Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has many filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to avoid redundancy and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'I do not often go to the library because, uh, I am, uh, very used to with the ebooks,' say 'I rarely visit the library because I am accustomed to using ebooks and online articles, which are more convenient.'

예시: I rarely visit the library because I am accustomed to using ebooks and online articles, which are more convenient for my daily needs. Moreover, there isn't a library close to my home, so accessing books online suits me better.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'I usually visit the library to study and access research materials that I cannot find online. Additionally, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.'

예시: I usually visit the library to study and access research materials that I cannot find online. Additionally, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better on my work.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is unclear. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Also, provide more specific details to enrich your answer. For example, say 'Yes, I used to go to the library every weekend with my parents. One of my fond memories is borrowing my favorite storybook with my father and exploring new books together.'

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library every weekend with my parents. One of my fond memories is borrowing my favorite storybook with my father and exploring new books together.

제안: Your answer contains many filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'Yes, libraries are popular among Chinese kids for academic purposes. Moreover, many schools encourage students to visit libraries to find and explore books in a quiet environment.'

예시: Yes, libraries are popular among Chinese kids for academic purposes. Moreover, many schools encourage students to visit libraries to find and explore books in a quiet environment.

× I am, uh, very used to with the ebooks and the online research articles, uh, which is very convenient to me, uh, for the daily basis.

✓ I am very used to the ebooks and the online research articles, which are very convenient for me on a daily basis.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed directly by the object without the preposition 'with'. Also, 'for the daily basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis'. This correction improves prepositional usage and natural phrasing.

× so I prefer a online books since, uh, I am in the, since I.

✓ so I prefer online books since, uh, I am in the, since I.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'online books'. Articles 'a' or 'an' are used with singular countable nouns. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× I usually go to the library for my academic purpose to do study and for my research articles as, uh, for the research, uh, uh, purpose.

✓ I usually go to the library for my academic purposes to study and for my research articles, as for research purposes.

The phrase 'for my academic purpose' should be pluralized to 'academic purposes' to indicate general use. Also, 'to do study' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to study'. The phrase 'for the research purpose' should be 'for research purposes' for natural expression.

× I do not found any material, study material of the academic materials from the online.

✓ I did not find any study material or academic materials online.

The verb 'found' is the past tense of 'find', but here the auxiliary 'do' is used, which requires the base form 'find'. Also, 'from the online' is incorrect; 'online' is used without 'the' and 'from'. This correction fixes tense and preposition errors.

× So it is very convenient to me go there, uh, which is very quite place, so I can concentrate on my.

✓ So it is very convenient for me to go there, which is a very quiet place, so I can concentrate.

The phrase 'convenient to me' should be 'convenient for me'. Also, 'very quite place' is incorrect; it should be 'very quiet place'. The sentence was incomplete; 'concentrate on my' is incomplete and corrected to 'concentrate'.

× Yes, I go to the library when I was a kid with my parents every weekend.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid with my parents every weekend.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go' to maintain tense consistency.

× There is a, one of my good memories also that I borrowing my favorite book from the library.

✓ One of my good memories is borrowing my favorite book from the library.

The phrase 'There is a' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'I borrowing' is incorrect; it should be 'I borrowed' or 'borrowing' as a gerund. The corrected sentence is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Uh, we are used to go, uh, with my father.

✓ We used to go with my father.

The phrase 'are used to go' is incorrect. 'Used to' is a modal-like expression indicating past habitual action and does not require 'are'. Also, 'used to go' is the correct form.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. Uh, they are a popular spot for the academic purpose.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. It is a popular spot for academic purposes.

'They are a popular spot' is incorrect because 'they' refers to kids, but the library is singular. Also, 'for the academic purpose' should be 'for academic purposes'. The correction fixes pronoun reference and preposition usage.

× so many schools are encouraged to the students or to the kids go to the library and found the books and explore the books, which is very quiet place, uh, for the.

✓ So many schools encourage students or kids to go to the library to find and explore books, which is a very quiet place.

The phrase 'are encouraged to the students' is incorrect; it should be 'encourage students'. Also, 'found the books' should be 'find books'. The phrase 'which is very quiet place' needs the article 'a'. This correction improves verb form, preposition, and article usage.