Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'I really want to go a library because in my headache schedule,' say 'I want to go to the library, but due to my busy schedule, I can only visit on weekends.'

예시: I want to go to the library, but due to my busy schedule, I can only visit on weekends. I prefer going then because I can read new books and enjoy the variety of materials available. I really like spending time there as it helps me relax and learn.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using appropriate vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas logically. Be specific about your activities and avoid repetition.

예시: I usually go to the library to study and complete my assignments because it offers a quiet environment free from distractions. Also, I like to borrow books related to my course to deepen my understanding of the subject. Sometimes, I use the library computer to research information for my projects.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct verb tenses. Use linking words like 'and' to connect ideas. Avoid awkward phrases and be specific about your experiences.

예시: Yes, I used to visit the library quite often when I was a child. I enjoyed reading storybooks and exploring different topics, which helped me develop a love for learning. The quiet and peaceful environment of the library made it a perfect place for me.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific and avoid unclear phrases like 'made Chi Chinese children frankly visit'. Instead, say 'Many Chinese children, especially in urban areas, often visit libraries because...'.

예시: Yes, many Chinese children, especially in urban areas, often visit libraries. These libraries provide valuable resources for studying and reading, which help children improve their knowledge and academic skills.

× Yes, I really want to go a library because in my headache schedule I have not so much time to go in library but in my weekends I prefer to go library for new books read up and moreover they are a variety of books and I really like to spend time in the library.

✓ Yes, I really want to go to a library because in my hectic schedule I do not have much time to go to the library but on my weekends I prefer to go to the library to read new books and moreover there is a variety of books and I really like to spend time in the library.

The preposition 'to' is required after the verb 'go' when indicating a destination. Also, 'in my headache schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'in my hectic schedule'. 'Go in library' should be 'go to the library'. 'In my weekends' should be 'on my weekends'. 'Go library' should be 'go to the library'. 'They are a variety of books' should be 'there is a variety of books'. Correct preposition usage improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I really want to go a library because in my headache schedule I have not so much time to go in library but in my weekends I prefer to go library for new books read up and moreover they are a variety of books and I really like to spend time in the library.

✓ Yes, I really want to go to a library because in my hectic schedule I do not have much time to go to the library but on my weekends I prefer to go to the library to read new books and moreover there is a variety of books and I really like to spend time in the library.

The phrase 'not so much time' is awkward; the correct quantifier is 'not much time'. Using appropriate quantifiers like 'much' for uncountable nouns such as 'time' is important for grammatical correctness.

× I usually go to the library to study and complete my assignment because offer a quiet environment free from the distraction.

✓ I usually go to the library to study and complete my assignments because it offers a quiet environment free from distractions.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'offers'. Also, 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match the context. Correct preposition and article usage is necessary for clarity.

× I also like to blow books related to my course to depend my understanding of subject.

✓ I also like to borrow books related to my course to deepen my understanding of the subject.

The verb 'blow' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'borrow'. 'Depend' should be 'deepen' to express increasing understanding. Also, 'understanding of subject' needs the article 'the' before 'subject'. Correct verb choice and article usage are essential.

× Sometime I use use the library computer to research information for my project.

✓ Sometimes I use the library computer to research information for my project.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, there is a repeated word 'use use' which should be corrected to a single 'use'. Proper word form and elimination of repetition improve sentence correctness.

× Yes, I used to visit the library quite often when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to visit the library quite often when I was a child.

This sentence is correct in past tense usage; no correction needed.

× I enjoyed sto reading story books and exploring the different topics which help in helped me to develop a love for learning.

✓ I enjoyed reading story books and exploring different topics which helped me to develop a love for learning.

The phrase 'sto reading' is incorrect; it should be 'reading'. 'Help in helped me' is incorrect; it should be 'helped me'. Also, 'the different topics' can be 'different topics' without 'the'. Correct verb forms and preposition usage are necessary.

× The quiet and the peaceful in mind environment of the library made it perfect place.

✓ The quiet and peaceful environment of the library made it a perfect place.

The phrase 'in mind environment' is incorrect and unnecessary. The adjectives 'quiet' and 'peaceful' should directly modify 'environment'. Also, 'perfect place' needs the article 'a'. Correct adjective order and article usage improve clarity.

× Yes, made Chi Chinese children frankly visit libraries specifically in the urban area.

✓ Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in urban areas.

The phrase 'made Chi Chinese children frankly visit' is incorrect and unclear. The pronoun usage and word order are wrong. Correct pronoun and word order usage is essential for clarity.

× Where are the access to such facilities in areas library often seen as valuable place for studying and reading, which help kid improve their acknowledgement and academic skill, for example.

✓ Where there is access to such facilities, libraries are often seen as valuable places for studying and reading, which help kids improve their knowledge and academic skills, for example.

The sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'Where are the access' should be 'Where there is access'; 'in areas library' should be 'in areas, libraries'; 'valuable place' should be plural 'valuable places'; 'help kid' should be 'help kids'; 'acknowledgement' is incorrect in this context, 'knowledge' is correct; 'academic skill' should be plural 'academic skills'. Proper preposition, article, and noun form usage is necessary.