Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免多余的词汇，并且注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because it is close to my house. I enjoy reading books about science and art there.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用连词使句子更连贯，同时注意动词形式和词汇搭配的准确性。

예시: Usually, I like to read books about science and art in the library because it helps me relax and learn more about the world. Also, I practice my computer skills there since the quiet environment is very helpful.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子，正确使用时态和词汇，避免重复。

예시: When I was a kid, I went to the library more often than now because I was very curious about many things, especially science.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意句子结构和词汇搭配。

예시: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they spend a lot of time studying at school and doing homework, so they may not have much free time to visit the library.

× Yes, sure, I'll go to the library at the weekend and I would like to read books like science or art.

✓ Yes, sure, I'll go to the library at the weekend and I would like to read books about science or art.

这里的介词用法错误，应该用about来表示“关于”，而不是like。

× Usually I would like to read books in the library like science and art which can help me relaxing and know more about this world and also I will to practice my computer techniques in the library because the quiet environment can also help me.

✓ Usually I would like to read books in the library about science and art which can help me relax and know more about this world, and also I will practice my computer techniques in the library because the quiet environment can also help me.

1. 介词错误，应该用about表示“关于”；2. 动词形式错误，relax是动词原形，不能用relaxing；3. will后面不加to，直接用动词原形practice。

× I should said when I was the kid, when I was a kid, I would go to the library more than now because in my children's life I am curious of everything, specially science.

✓ I should say when I was a kid, I would go to the library more than now because in my childhood I was curious about everything, especially science.

1. should后面用动词原形say，不是said；2. the kid用法错误，应该是a kid；3. children's life用法不当，应该用childhood；4. 时态错误，描述过去用was；5. 介词错误，curious后面用about；6. especially拼写错误。

× I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because in my view they need spend a lot of time in the school which to practice the paper and during the class.

✓ I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because in my view they need to spend a lot of time at school practicing for exams and during class.

1. need后面应加to不定式；2. 介词错误，应该用at school而不是in the school；3. which to practice the paper表达不正确，改为practicing for exams更自然；4. during the class改为during class更地道。

× So I don't think they have the time to go to library.

✓ So I don't think they have the time to go to the library.

go to后面需要加定冠词the，因为library是特指的地方。